Chaos. Order. Two opposing forces that cannot exist in harmony, yet must exist for balance to be possible. A delicate balance. One that should never be interuppted. Especially by those two forces spawning offspring...Oops, too late...
Page generated in 0.053 seconds
Total duration
864 users online
656,827 hits today, 2,829,583 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Okay,moved this chapter. Really love e fact that Daybreak and Twilight are in speaking terms again and his interaction with Celestia was very interesting to see. The scene with Dash was very hot, especially the baby talk and dog impression, but also very sweet and adorable. Thanks for the chapter. It was worth the wait.
Awesome!
so many feels... cant wait for more :p
This was a really good chapter.
So Daybreak and Twilight are now friends, even if there is going to be a fair bit of awkwardness with Twilight clearly still having feelings for him, but not wanting to wreck his relationship with Rainbow.
Mixed feelings all around from the rest of the elements. Applejack seems the most hostile, but with Daybreak's talent for lies, that's not surprising. It would be good to get a more in depth look at the others, as its very difficult to read them this chapter.
Celestia it seems has some big flaws. While Daybreak's childhood make it very clear about how she felt having a son of Discord, her declaration seems to imply she has been hiding her own bias against him by using the people's hatred against Discord as a justification. Once she finally saw that Daybreak was not just a miniature Discord, and that he was going to make a genuinely selfless act for Twilight, she got a brief look at her own treatment of him. I doubt it has completely changed her thoughts on everything, but it may get her to start thinking a bit more deeply about her relationship with her son.
Luna was awesome here, and clearly wants everyone to be a big happy family. There is a lot of genuine love with her, and Daybreak is able to actual express his clear feelings for her as well. He still doesn't really understand love or friendship, but he definitely has happy feelings for his aunt, and that is really nice.
As for Daybreak and Rainbow, their clear love for eachother is really touching. Daybreak still can't really bring himself to say it out loud, as it goes so far against his well earned beliefs, but he clearly loves Rainbow as much as she loves him. I can't wait until he can finally tell her this.
I'm so excited for what is next to come. Flying lessons, some sudo-sibling fun, and being they are in Rainbow's house, Daybreak may get a glimpse of a family photo showing Dash's Dad, and learn that he and Rainbow had a hidden bond from a long time ago.
I realize that Celestia wouldn't care all that much but why was there no reaction from Celestia nor Luna with the very obvious scarring on Daybreak's back; or did I miss something?
8024359 Was he wearing a shirt?
8024359
It'll come up later. Though honestly i thought i put a shirt on him. I could swear i did
8031706 You most likely did my memory just really sucks.
8033141 No worries man. It's good to know if i miss things like this
Luna is fucking awesome in this, her short time in scene this chapter has made her one of my favorite charcters in this story. She seems to genuinely care and the "thine ass" comment is probably one of the best lines from Luna in any story I've read so far! Loved this chapter