Chaos. Order. Two opposing forces that cannot exist in harmony, yet must exist for balance to be possible. A delicate balance. One that should never be interuppted. Especially by those two forces spawning offspring...Oops, too late...
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okay, no, fuck you. that 'beginning of the end' bullshit is the sorta fucking tripe that actually makes me want to rip out my pituitary gland. i hate you for doing that. but i fucking love this story so fuck off (but not for too long so we can get a new chapter)
How dare you leave the chapter like this! Fucking cliffhanger.
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I literally can’t tell if you’re mad or not and I love it
also
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Wait one chapter. You’ll certainly know what he DIDN’T say. Though i will say there’s a hint already very present
jesus christ THE CLIFF HANGERS ;(((
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I can taste the salt from here
It took all damn day, but i read this entire story thus far...Christ my eyes are tired. With that out of the way, how dare you! Drawing me in so deeply and forcing me to care so much about the characters you've built whilst laughing and shedding tears. This is not fanfiction, it is literary art! I fear for Daybreak, the foreshadowing cliffhanger is making my heart break.
Just one question, if he killed Rainbow Dash's mother due to Solar Eclipse fighting for control of his body and Solar Eclipse didnt exist until after he left his father's home and he didnt go to Discord until after Rainbolt took him to the orphanage but Firefly was already dead at that point.Sorry, very tired so I may be mistaking some points but I could have sworn that firefly was dead prior to Daybreak using the Mirror of Truth.
P.S. As if this point in the story, fuk dat solar bitch! Alright, Imma get some sleep. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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You sir, have spotted a plot hole! Which I must now go back and fix. The dialogue in the chapter when he first meets Rainbolt will need to be changed to clarify he's already found Daddy Discord. But yes, you are right, by the time he meets Rainbolt he's already found Discord and killed Firefly. Thank you for spotting this and pointing it out for me. I get so wrapped up in all the details of writing this thing, I sometimes forget the minor bits here and there.
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There's a few other spots I need to edit as well now. Just the two chapters featuring Rainbolt have been slightly altered to keep with proper timeline events. Nothing story altering though.
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Not gonna lie, actually impressed you made sense of that second paragraph. I went back and read it again and could barely make sense of it. Guess I really was tired lol. Guess it's a testament to how great of a story this is!
Seriously though (I have the feeling Celestia does actually care about him and had a good reason) I hate that bitch Celestia in this story. 🔫 I feel very emotionally invested in this story and can't wait for more!