Chaos. Order. Two opposing forces that cannot exist in harmony, yet must exist for balance to be possible. A delicate balance. One that should never be interuppted. Especially by those two forces spawning offspring...Oops, too late...
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Well... Daybreak's dead.
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I am?
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Think you went a bit overboard on the injuries the MC takes. People die of bloodlose alone pretty quick from the injuries you described, also no magic remember. Unless you’re going to break that condition this early in the exile, you should have him won without taking that much damage. You’ve made it very hard to write yourself out of this hole.
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https://youtu.be/F1xAUfdK9FE
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B-but I am writing! I can only go so fast if u wish for quality content