After a near riot at the Cloudsdale School for Gifted Flyers, Twilight decides to take some matters of friendship into her own hands. But when the other princesses block her from using royal funds she must find her own way to fund the small camp and hopefully learn from those society thinks they already know.
After finding out that Silver Spoon is spending the summer at a small metalurgy camp Diamond Tiara is even worse than ever before. At the end of their rope Diamond Tiara's parents decide to send her to Twilight Sparkles camp, hoping to end her bullying once and for all.
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Chapters (4)
Oh, dear. Even for royalty, there is a lot of paperwork involved in getting an anti-bullying program. This is a nitpick, but perhaps you could place dividers between the letter exchanges to make it a little easier to follow the flow of all the works.
5316042 Thanks for the nitpick. I'll be sure to follow that advice as letters, while they won't tell the entire story will make up a good portion :)
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One thing you could do is use the "quote" feature
to indicate individual letters.
Alternatively, you could use a page break like this, using [ hr ] without the spaces.
5316868 Telling a story mostly through letters is great. You get to write from different perspectives while striving to make everything flow together into an overall narrative.
CrowMagnon suggested some nice ways to divide parts, especially the long line (almost like a page break). You can also insert a few symbols in-between like *** with additional space.
This summer school sounds a lot like a re-educationnal camp man.
why would someone do this? i donno? meh! cool story ^^
5811511 Thanks :)
I am enjoying this story so far. My question is where it DT's usual temperament? She is anything but this passive, even in her own thoughts she seems so passive it barely feels like her. Looking forward to the next chapter.
5812519 Thanks for the feedback. I will admit Diamond is hard for me to write, but I am planning on showing more of her show side soon.