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Stargazer129


"I'm not addicted to reading, just let me finish reading this chapter."

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For Luna, some days are just so boring. So what is a little princess to do?

Make her own kingdom of course.

Luna is a filly in this story, and is told from her point of view.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 23 )

This was cute, very,very cute. This made my day, after getting injured at the pool.

6041309 Thank you for reading, and I hope you're ok! Getting injured at the pool is the worst ;-;

6041329. Thank you. I was at my friends' community pool, and was hit by some kid flying from a slide. My friends little sister then somehow same over me, hit my nose, and I had a bloody nose. I looked like I murdered something. Brutally.

6041358. Yeah. Anyway, I, good now,except for the fact the worst spot the kid hit me is where my glasses rest on my nose. Yay.

Very very well done!

Just one thing you should now, You are missing a few letters here and there. I dont know if they just didnt get sent over from Gdoc's or what, but just thought i should let you know...

Also, punch to the gut at the end!

6041361 Thank you for your positive feedback! I never seem to see those small mistakes, but I'll try to fix that soon!

6041361. I know. That ending. So perfect. Anyway, let's hop this story gets published. I will then get bragging rights.

Oh, Luna, why you gotta' break my heart like that?

Cuteness overload!!!! :pinkiehappy:

6042036. Featured! I mean featured! Sorry!

This was cute. Adorable. #FILLYLUNA'SCARDBOARDBOXKINGDOM

that hashtag will never catch on. Darn.

This was a nice story. Short but nice. I like it.

D'aww! So cute!

6067232 My thoughts exactly.

Here you go, have a like:twilightsmile:.

That was an adorable little story to read. :twilightsmile:

I luv filly wona stories and that was cutie wotie-est

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