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> > This story was written for an Alicorn OC Competition < <
Story Description:
When the first sun rises,
The Queen and King depart.
Left in the night, left in the dark
I am left here, with a shadow of a heart.
When two-thousand years pass,
By banishment will fall.
But for now, I will be here;
awaiting my call.
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I love the story (About time you put a story out)
5297388 Thanks!!
I like it a lot, my self.
And yeah, you're absolutely right about that.
5297390 I guess I am,
About time us fans are getting kinda sleepy over her Elite
5297415 Thanks for hanging in there.
Nice story! Kinda long for a one-shot. Whatever, good luck with the contest!
5297566 Thanks so much, Dusk!
I almost cant write short story to save my life!!
I've seen some with 12,000+ before, too.
I like it!
5297607 you have a good fic idea here, could you by chance continue to build upon this? Good luck with your contest.
Brony On!
Wow
this was some sort of deep. I LUV IT!!!
5297903 Aww, thanks!!
That's good to know.
5297837 (And while I'm not a brony): Right back atcha bro! Brohoof!!
(And actually this is a story to help push forward an idea I had a while ago... Sure hope I can make it.)
Thanks a lot!!
5297613 Thanks, me to!!
5297961 well, I'll support ya the entire way.
5298331 Thanks!
5297451 What do you mean?
OMG! That was amazing! You had me crying at the last part!
(Stupid Tears)
You did such a great job with this one-shot!
And if this is for a contest, I hope you win! That had me in mixed feelings. Thanks for sharing this with everypony!
5299336 I meant that since you seem to care so much about my not putting stories out, thanks a lot for having the patience to wait.
Sure hope it was worth it.
5300005 Haha - thanks!
I didn't really mean for it to abe a roller coaster of emotions, but eh.
Glad to hear you liked it.
5300451
No, that's fine. I had fun reading it. You're really good at describing your words, and I have noticed that you have mispelled or forgot some words in some sentences.
5300469 Yeah... That happens a lot.
But like I said; no editing or revising was done... yet.
5300520 Oh, I see, right.
This was great. I loved the poetic feel of it, and some of those lines were definitely quotable. I hope we can learn more about Prince Eclipse!
-Sparkie
5359614 Thanks for your kind words.
Oh and what did you mean by
?
5360740
In my stories, I like to have a list of quotes I say in them I like (I also have them on my user page), and I think you had some in there like that. At least, to me.
-Sparkie
5362496 Haha oh, well thanks!
5363436
You're welcome.
I hope you enjoy Duct Tape.
-Sparkie
I know you probably won’t see this but is there any room for continuation
11458659
Hello! Thanks so much for your comment!
Uhm...not really sure about that one.... My history as a writer is complicated and somewhat non-existent after I stopped creating fan fics for MLP FIM.
So the answer is most likely no.
Sorry about that; but I'm happy you enjoyed it so much.
11461219
That’s okay I am the exact same way (very bad at writing)