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Rising Phoenix


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During the reign of Queen Infinity and King Cronos (Celestia's and Luna's parents), the Weather Factory didn't exist, because the Seasons were controlled by four princesses: Princess Autumn, Princess Bloom, Princess Sunny and Princess Blizzard. Here you will find the truth about their story and the tragedy that changed Equestria's History.

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Chapter 1:

hidding

*hiding

All the forest was expecting for the miracle to happen.

Correction: Everybody in the forest was expecting for a miracle to happen.

The reason of the expectation where the ponies inside the Season Temple, where only alicorns could come in.

Correction: The reason of the expectation, were the ponies inside the Season Temple. Only alicorns were allowed to enter this temple.

Princess Autumn was standing at the Temple's alter, with her wings opened, her eyes closed and her horn glowing intensely.

Correction: Princess Autumn was standing at the Temple's alter. Her wings were opened and her eyes closed. Her horn was glowing quite intensively.


Chapter is too short and grammar. ~ Silver Spoon

Alicorn OCs.

ALICORN OCS EVERYWHERE!

I made some changes in the story, because I think I don't need so many chapters, and they are too short, so I've decided to put some of them together. What do you think?

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Well, now you have one alicorn less, feel better?

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