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bluemoon1996


I give folk what they want, nothing more. And that just happens to be poorly thought out Fanfics with bad updating schedules

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There is indeed a season for all things, a time to live, and a time to die. A time to sow, and a time to reap. A time to build, and a time destroy. Equestria has reached such a time. There were many that believed this day would never come, and they were wrong. The time has come for Equestria to die, and unfortunately, we all have a front row seat.


A psuedo-Supernatural crossover with Livingdeath

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Could the legends of the giant willy be true?
THE END! THE END TIMES HAVE COME!!!
-Gamerpoop skyrim.

5288381

Alright.... I guess:applejackunsure:

Why would you apologize for including dark themes and gore in a story tagged to include dark themes and gore? We all know what we're about to read.

That aside, this was... mediocre. I enjoyed the plot a decent amount, but you represented War very abnormally, giving him traits more commonly associated with Death or Pestilence. Additionally, your descriptive text was most certainly in need of improvement.

5288490

Well, we were basing them more off the supernatural version of the horsemen

5288539 Doesn't matter whether he's supernatural or not. War is not a stealthy, drive-people-crazy-style character. He's a very physical character who destroys people and structures with brute force. Death causes pain and suffering, while Pestilence spreads disease and insanity; both would have fit the role much better.

5289624 like on Something Hollows!
Or whatever it's called!:pinkiehappy:

Actually wait no. Nevermind. I'm thinking of the headless horseman. War was actually very stealthy in disguising himself until he could almost destroy the main character:twilightoops:

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