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I just want to get through English, that's it! But for some damn reason, I'm slowly turning into a changeling that my niece made for me awhile back. Can someone please fill me in? I'm utterly lost.
Now, I'm getting dragged to Chicago by my niece and two best friends. Hopefully, they can fix us there...
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Welcome to the madness my friend. Awesome story.
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I'm looking forward to the zebra filly!
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Don't worry; she'll be a fun one ^^
Oh god....one of my characters, Emi and Kylie meeting just went through my head... Poor poor Johnny might not survive... nor the town.
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Or if Johnny gets a soda
Little bit of headcanon there: sugar makes changelings super hyper
5411220 either way, someone's gonna snap.
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Probibally dear old dalton and your protagonist
I am pretty sure its gonna not gunna
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curse my Texan tendicies
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Seemed extremely appropiate
So the protagonist is turning into Doppel Ganger, if I understand right? Or am I thinking of a different character by someone else?
5411371 Your picture scares me.
Ah! So we have another story added to the OT Verse. The group is very small, but it is slowly growing. Interesting story, except that it reminds me of "Stroke of a Digital Brush" with a few twists (and I'm following that story because I find it to be quite funny and interesting).
5411489 ...
In case you don't know what it's it's some fanmade image from Five nights at freddy's 2 using google
i.imgur.com/kHorGmf.gif
5411508 That's why it scares me. Those games were terrifying.
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Yeah he's turning to doppel
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That's good enough for me
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And you shall get it in due time... After the holidays of course
5411886 For me they weren't terryfing
They were frustation
Stupid foxy
Stupid Music box
Pure frustation
5411258 Could i see the source link for your avatar?
good story so far. I never thought of such a plot
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Thank you
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I'll send it via a PM
This is a nice start, I don't think I've seen a story where it hasn't been an isolated incident as of yet. Definitely going to be watching for updates.
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Thank you
If you like this you ought to read the others in the 'verse, they're far more well written
Nice job. This story sounds pretty unique. Can't wait for further chapters
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I'm already working on it
Check out some of the others if you want
I've never read anything from the OTverse, so this was something of a feet-first experience, but I think your story is a good introduction to it all. Specifically, I like your style of "dropping into it" and letting the reader figure out the details on their own. It shows a trust in the reader, which I really appreciate (nothing is worse than being treated like a simpleton :D)! I really hope you add more soon!
5428761 Sweet. Have fun
5428761 Sweet. Have fun
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There's going to be exposition in the next chapter as he finally realizes what going on and that he's going to turn into a giant roach
And I'm just going to say it, there will be an Ebola joke when he develops the changeling goop
Hah! I really enjoyed this!
I definitely giggled aloud at various points. "Congratulations, would you like a cookie?" was a near full-on laugh! Your sense of humor totally gets me. Kudos!
I'm sure there were other references to other things, but the one that got me singing the song in my head (okay, I may have sing-sung it aloud, too) was "pink fluffy unicorns dancing on rainbows."
Very well-executed little insert; even without knowing the reference, it slipped by without drawing too much attention to itself. I'm sure you snuck in some other references, too, and those were obviously well done, since I didn't feel like I was confused or missing out on anything at any point.
I also enjoy the gradual revelation and realization going on. Buck... Celestia... C'mon, buddy! You got this! Okay, admittedly, I probably wouldn't fully get it, either. My first thought wouldn't be "I'm turning into a changeling." I'd likely be going "Holy ponyfeathers what did I eat? Get me to the nearest hospital because I'm having full-on hallucinations!"
Very well done! My first read into this whole OTVerse shindig. I'll definitely have to venture out and both read more stories from this OTVerse, as well as your own works!
Keep on keepin' on!
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He finally figures out what's going on in the next chapter when he goes and talks with his horse contacts
And I will say his brother/Kylie's dad is a rather big dude
lol the Horny joke
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Only the classiest of humor
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Eeyup
5434693 Well while I don't really think I was bothered by the convos not starting with a capital letter but the brain jokes and the comedy is almost SPOT ON. When you were like "GAME OVER MAN GAME OVER!!!" It was HILARIOUS!!! Awesome chapter.
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Thank you
I will admit I'm kinda sucky at emotional stuff
5435242 Don't write emotions... FEEL emotions. Then write your feelings as best you can. Also it didn't need to be so emotional. I believe the comedy somewhat overshadowed this but it was all good in the end.
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I'll keep that in mind for the next chapter
I dunno why, but transformation fics always get me... maybe I just enjoy seeing a character so far beyond what is realistically believable that they have to react? Or maybe it's because changelings are awesome? I haven't the slightest. What I do know, however, is that I'm certainly looking forward to how this turns out!
5412468 have you read "Diaries of a Madman"? the name "Dopple" always reminds me of "that" changeling.
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Sunshine and rainbows mate
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The name actually comes from a changeling I use for RPing with is named after the tumblr blog My little Changeling
Not the most original of plotlines, but I'll see where you take it.
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That's good enough for me ^^
This chapter was dangerously similar to my story's depiction of this scene. Though, I'm glad that your characters are behaving at least somewhat differently then mine. While mine tend to get somewhat angry and panicky, yours just broke down.
It's still better than oryginal stuff, so get going.
Uh-oh... He texted. Texted but didn't call.
Has his voice changed?
Have his parents locked him up, and he has to text his friends or risk getting caught?
Oh Ra, tell me he didn't switch genders...
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No one is getting r63ed
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I'm working on it
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*phew* Alright. I just hope he's okay...
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Let's just say Johnny gets rather pissed off at Dalton's old man and yells at him