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Melancholy


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There's a new tailors in Ponyville.
Cuff Links has just opened his new tailors shop, Collars and Cuffs, and hopes to make a shot at the big contracts in Canterlot and beyond. While good at what he does he's new to running a business and may need help getting off the ground.

Rarity has noticed there's a new shop in town. Can she cope with competition from this new master of fashion, or will the pressure of constantly being compared to him wear her down?

Pinkie has found a new pony in town. It must be party time.


Tie in, Outpost Everfree

Chapters (15)
Comments ( 72 )

This gets a thumbs up for content. Sounds interesting. :pinkiehappy:

Oh, and first!

Your title made me do a double take. I have such a dirty mind.

Jesus, Melancholy, the title made me reluctant to look at the description :rainbowlaugh:

did not double take at title just clicked :moustache: ha no dirty mind

seems good so far. at a couple of points you started a sentence without a capital letter. for example, in the last paragraph. just thought i should point it out.
have a stache! :moustache:

First paragraph, last line. I believe you meant customers.

Interesting... I wonder how this is going to turn out...:moustache:

DAMMIT! Sweetie Belle just trolled me...

:unsuresweetie:

You know you just did...

507131 Sweetie's a dictionary, Fluttershy's a tree and Scootaloo is a chicken. Meme overload (especially since i'm trying to read all over 300 pages of memes on my little brony...)

Shit's *dons sunglasses* about to get real.
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The plot thickens... RD knows this pony? Well get on with it! :pinkiehappy:

Interesting. Though the writing is a bit awkward when there is text and then characters reply with speech. I am enjoying this story though.:pinkiehappy:

507787 So someone noticed.......:raritywink:
Yes I appreciate it may be awkward, I can only ask your forbearance while I experiment with the effect.
507365 A rather....extreme reaction?

good chapter. however, there were a few instances where you didn't capitalise some names 'n' stuff.
:moustache: :moustache:

I think Pinkie should just put a tent ontoppa Links head... Maybe a green tent.

Oooh see what I did there?:trollestia:

This is interesting, keep it up.:pinkiehappy:

Interesting characters... also shady.

Great job with your story, looking forward to next chapter! :moustache::moustache:

519553 You'll get nothing out of me. NOTHING!

”If you’re coming then you’ll need something to wear, I’m afraid your wardrobe didn’t come though a thousand years of disuse and obscurity as well as you did.”
The looser walked off, tail between his legs while his comrades breathed a sigh of relief.

1. Through.
2. Loser.

Also... how the buck did the guard play rock, paper and scissors? I am astounded...

521914 YOU SAW NOTHING! (thanks)

As for the guards....well it takes a special kind of pony to protect the princesses :raritywink:.

How in the actual f*ck did the guards play rock paper scissors?

I wonder how Rainbow knows him. I am very interested in finding out.

“Fluttershy...Can I...can I talk you you? Alone?”
shouldn't that read "to you"?
good chapter.

Sadly, when I saw the title, I was a person with a dirty mind :twilightblush: BUT than I read the first few chapters and it's AWESOME :pinkiehappy: can't wait to read more

Ohhhh Lawd.... I see this going down hill..... Pinks will recognize the designer at the party and Luna will be humiliated..... :pinkiegasp: .... OR you may surprise us :twilightsmile: ...... I DUNNO :derpytongue2: .... Another amazing chapter, keep it up :pinkiehappy:

If it made Fluttershy act like that it must be important. I want to know!:flutterrage:

“So, it’s about time I got to your bottom.”

...:rainbowderp:

Yes, I've been waiting for Fluttershy to have a bigger part in this story, she's my favourite.

558021 YOU READ FAST.
Also I agree, Fluttershy is god tier pony.

558027 I sure do read fast, I have a lot of practice.:yay:

Now that you wrote about it... we never heard about Links cutie mark now did we?

Also... I have a dirty mind when I read that Fluttershy pulled down Links pants:fluttercry:

560656 You're all such horrid people. Fluttershy is an innocent flower!

562121Yeah... a flower just waiting to be pollinated. Damn Fluttershy hates me:flutterrage:

562158 My sharp objects draw hungers.....

562169 Hang on a minute... do you prefer Fluttershy... or Luna?

562270 STOP ASKING HARD QUESTIONS! My brain can't process story ideas and work out complex metaphysical questions like that, so I'm going back to writing.

Another great chapter :twilightsmile: AND THIS GOD DAMN SECRET IS TEARING ME APART :twilightangry2: :flutterrage::pinkiecrazy::facehoof: TELL US ALREADY :pinkiecrazy: none the less the story is great :pinkiehappy: keep up the good work

The Best Gig Ever.
I have no idea who was filming, but my head features occasionally in that vid.

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