Best line ever - "You can shine no matter what your're made of."
Celestia almost believed that her marefriend's visit was going to be relaxing and more importantly uneventful.
"Almost" being the keyword.
From romantic hijinks to politics to other insane happenings this visit is going to be a tad bit scrazy.
But that's okay, because Celestia doesn't sweat the small stuff.
12/15/14: (Just edited 3rd chapter. Sorry about the grammar, I need to stop writing when I'm tired. Let me know if there are more problems)
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duuuuuuuuuuuuuude~ dont leave me like this, such an epically funny story and a ball busting cliff hanger, 10/10 Serra Ratings!
Wait what?! Twilight's been replaced and Celestia isn't even a little worried that the real Twilight is probably an emotional wreck right now?! Some marefriend.
I am really curious as to who Fakelight is.... Definitely not Blueblood as he is too traditional for it.
would you be mad if i called it correctly or would you just deny it because im pretty sure i know exactly who it is
your answer will decide if i say anything or not
5356003 I would not be upset, I do these stories to help me deal with some things in my life. I would just ask that you do the spoiler cover thing. I know people will still look under the cover anyway because it's too tempting. I just won't confirm or deny anything until the story is done. But please feel free.
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this is just my guess but with how you set it up and the dialogue that was said i have to say my guess is chrysalis
Okay, I'm confused, Luna is helping this individual. She clocked Twilight over the head and decieved her sister (tried to anyway), without even knowing that this individuals plan was!? What the hell Luna!? Also, if Celestia heard everything, why isn't she pissed that Luna hit Twilight over the head with a lead pipe?
okay i have this feeling that the one who is is Fakelight is really sunset
http://writingexplained.com/apart-vs-part-whats-difference
i know i commented on this chapter before and i am sorry to bug you i was just wondering if by any chance you know when you might post next chapter
i understand that life can get in the way and i don't want to rash you or anything i just asking if you don't know that is okay and take your time on making a grate chapter
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i need more
"I am alright, Number Muncher. But am afraid that I have other things to attend to so I'll just point out that you you should have multiplied by three instead of dividing by six in that last column there. Fix it and all should be well, have a good day."
but you was actually wrong
sooner
'Noble Dragon' (in single quotes)
Luna. Hey. Hey Luna. Hey. Hey! Guess what? Guess! Go on, guess!
Yep, that's right, Lulu.
PANIC.
Yeah, don't panic when there's going to be a sun goddess chasing you, most likely trying to kill you, who's also your sister. And isn't her lover the Element of Magic? Yeah, you're screwed in every (normal) meaning of the word.
Good for Spike!
Abso-fucking-lutely can't get off the floor from laughing!
I... don't really remember what this fic was like when I started reading it, and I don't really want to go back to check if it was every actually decent, but at this point, this is simply ridiculous in the worst possible way. The dialogue is insanely OOC and the comedy is non-existent. At this point, I'll be giving a downvote, if only because I can't believe you've managed to write so many characters not only so poorly in terms of being IC without managing to make the comedy funny. About the only decent thing about this most recent chapter I can say is that your writing style isn't entirely horrible with present tense... not that past still wouldn't work better.
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You're entitled to your opinion.
I know I'm not a good writer but I'll keep writing anyway.
Ignore FoolRegnant. This is flipping brilliant.
This is a great chapter but way to leave us hanging . Please bring out the next chapter please.
Message for Fakelight and Co-planners: Ya Dun Goof'd.
For me was very short this chapter♥♥♥
why
roll credits
that flank son (in a western voice)
well fuck you author this is what goes wrongscontent-ord1-1.xx.fbcdn.net/v/l/t1.0-9/12654379_987335421356658_3818115149288002131_n.jpg?oh=6eb32885f074354409d06fdcd007becd&oe=5779FAEF
I really need to start checking dates before I start to read. Really hope this isn't dead because I was having a lot of fun with it
Please continue the story, I want to know how it ends.