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CarnivalOfDarkness


Welcome to the Carnival of Darkness! I'm more of a dark person, so I tend to write and read about more dark things, might throw some fluff here and there

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In a world driven by friendship, what will it take for a King to destroy all that? Simple, corruption. At the hooves of King Sombra, everypony is doomed, and with the Mane Six more older now; will they be able to stop him? or will he parish all who oppose him and take his rightful place as the ruler of all evil. What happens when the children of the Mane Six get brought into the war between Good And Evil? Will they be able to survive?

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 8 )

Alright, apocalypse fanfic, I like.

Let's see here, we got the mane 6 and spike (of course), King Sombra as the villain, Sunset Shimmer as a supporting an-

T-the c-c-cake twins.

THE FUCKING CAKE TWINS! WHAT?

5270805 lol there's a reason for that. If they were still newborn foals, then I would say the same thing butttttt, considering they are aged up and I can see them doing something other than baking, that's the reason for them being supporting characters. I see them being more creative and special due to being born to two earth ponies but being so different as neither are earth ponies or the same. It will all play out.

5270816

Oh. It just doesn't really fit in this. It's like having Pac Man in the Matrix, or Unico in Lord of The Rings.

Wait, I'm in what?

N-nothing. Overall, I think this shows some promise if you edit it a bit, and work out some kinks. If you need an editor, I'll be willing to serve!

5270822 that would be awesome actually. Because my editing isn't the greatest in the world. There are some mistakes in this story already. Lol. Also Pac Man in the Matrix would be badass. Although it may not fit, it would be hilarious to see.

5270838

Alright, just PM me when you're done with the next chapter and I'll be willing to look over them

It seems... an interesting premise, I'll give it a shot.
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Well it has a nice start. Can't wait to see Sombra :twilightsmile:.

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