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You have no idea how buildup works.
5427967 what is there to build up to? they failed. there was nothing to build up to but their deaths from the very start.
5428027
...Wow. You know nothing about writing horror stories.
Look, mate. Simply putting the main characters in an oven does not make you a good author. It makes you an asinine idiot writing a trollfic. The whole point is to build up to why they're in the oven. What they did wrong.
There's none of that here. This is just garbage.
5428068 hmm... i don't really see what you're going for here...
the Elements failed to sync
Discord takes advantage of this
The Mane Six are tortured
they share one last moment of broken friendship together
Discord creates an oven out of the earth below them using the cloud to rain down fire
That's it.
I really don't see the problem here...
As for horror, i wasn't aiming at scaring anyone really, i just wanted to do a Discord-wins Fic...
Call me crazy but I like this
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5428437 Thank you for standing up with me against the Holiday Brigade. They tried to downvote my story all at once and sink it like the Titanic. But not if I can help it. If you can, get word out that Sick Pains need to be saved! Save my baby from the haters! She isn't even 2 hours old!
5428561 I'll see what I can do
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5428068
"...wow. You know nothing about writing horror stories.
Look, mate. Simply putting the main characters in an oven does not make you a good author. It makes you an asinine idiot writing a trollfic. The whole point is to build up to why they're in the oven. What they did wrong.
There's none of that here. This is just garbage."
I agree with you because there is absolutely no sign of horror in this fiction. There isn't meant to be any sign of horror.
Discordia H Eris isn't going to be your mate if you criticise her in a negative tone.
Yeah, we also believe that eating carrots help you see in the dark.
How is this a trollfic?
Discordia H Eris did build it up. Reread it. Do you want a carrot to help you?
Well, the elements didn't sync with them. I think that's the reason why all of the consequences in this story are here, in this fiction. In fact the main purpose of the story is to see the possible consequences of the elements failing.
That's just a insult, it has no meaning. It's a waste of those few seconds it took to write them down. Mate.
5429507
You need to lay off the cybin, mate.
Nah,but seriously though, if you don't have anything nice to say just don't say anything or at least don't go around calling things shit, even if you don't like it. Just say nice and politely "It's a good story but I think that you could" blah blah blah "and that would make it better."
This is a brony community, not a war zone.
*claps slow prolonged claps*
Perfect darling, perfect! I absolutely adored it
O_O *is still twitching* the torture wasn't graphic enough but i enjoyed it.
Nice I liked how you killed them and then cooked them I bet discord had a good dinner or lunch or maybe breakfast
5428091
WHY?
5428091 A sick as shit Discord Wins.