The Mare Who Fell to Earth

by HudsonHawk

A Note from HudsonHawk

To My Valued Readers:

I would like to thank you for reading this work. It was my first for this site, and the first piece of writing I had ever done in a long while. You see, when I comes to self-image and self-esteem, I'm a Fluttershy. I apologize for things that I haven't done wrong or at all, I tend to think the worst about myself, and if I do something that's regarded as truly creative, I tend to put it down to luck.

I had a lot of fun, though and in the end, that, along with entertaining those who read this, is what mattered to me. I just wanted to write a ripping yarn featuring characters from my favorite show next to Doctor Who, Night Court and Mystery Science Theater 3000. I am quite hopeful that I kept them in character. If I didn't, I'm sorry.

If you enjoyed it, please leave a comment. If you didn't... well, still leave a comment. But please, be constructive. No "YU RETArDED" or "U r FAG" style comments. Try and show me what I could do better. I know I could have plotted the story a bit better. There was a lot of writing by the seat of one's pants involved in the production, and I apologize if Jimmy comes off as Marty Stu-ish to some. I was trying to avoid that, and if I failed, I apologize. I did give him many of my likes, and he has Asperger's, just like me, but hey... write what you know.

If you truly enjoyed it, then it truly boosts my spirits to find out that what I wrote was enjoyed by someone. If not, I shall administer 40 lashes with my Fourth Doctor scarf to myself as punishment.

I may write again. Maybe I'll do a comedy, or something lighthearted next time. If anyone wants to pick up the story or do a spin-off, you have my permission. Just please leave a link to your story if you do.

Cheers!
-HudsonHawk

Comments

[ElemantalDragon]

I love it.

[Flutters Is Shy]

That was a wonderful story.
I wish I could give you more than one thumbs up...

[HudsonHawk]

5287712
For a first story, that's truly high praise. Thank you.

[HudsonHawk]

5314028
Definitely. I figured it's a nice thing to say to comfort someone in their darkest hour, so I used it.

[Bookhunter31901]

That was absolutely amazing, that would make the perfect movie. If you write a sequel, I'll be on it faster than Rainbow Dash can say "10 seconds flat". Yes, it was that good, the perfect balance between action and emotion. This, my good sir, is 40% cooler . Plz tell me you would try and make another story like that, if you don't then I give you this: . That last one is funny is it not, plz take thin into consideration

[HudsonHawk]

5318091
Manly tears were shed at that praise. I'm glad to see that people are truly enjoying what I write. Just gotta keep that ego in check...

I'm actually working with another writer on here to take the core premise and revamp it as a comedy. You can read the first installment here.

[Plain Hunter]

I just finished chapter 2 and I just have to say that this story is freaking amazing so far. I'm definitely fadding this to my favorites and will definitely read more in the future.

[HudsonHawk]

5332922
I'll take a look and try to rectify that. Thanks for pointing it out.

[SharpNote the FABULOUS]

That was great!

[HudsonHawk]

5335502
Thank you. It's nice to know I entertained someone.

[HudsonHawk]

5336432
Who doesn't?

[Sh4dowWalker96]

*slow clap* Very well done, my good sir. My favorite part would have to be where it was not an end, but rather, a new beginning. Not a "goodbye", but a "We will meet again." Excellent work.

[HudsonHawk]

5340144
Thank you. I'm glad you were entertained. I always liked the "good journey" line from Masters of the Universe, and I loved being able to use it here.

[datLunarRepublican]

This not only entertains your readers, but also sends out a valuable message. Wonderful story. Just... beautiful.
I wish I could follow more than one time.

[Dragon Eye]

9/10 needs more Evil Dead references

[MisterEdd]

This story was brief but enjoyable. Not bad for your first story.

My only complaint? Needed more cowbell.

That is all.

[Cameron D Monkee]

Is the name of the story supposed to be a reference to the David Bowie movie "The Man Who Fell To Earth"?

[WildFire 24]

That was an amazing fanfic and I'm glad I came across this one there not many fanfics like this atleast have not read many like this