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After talking Fluttershy into allowing Twilight to cast an age spell on her for her studies Twilight and Discord are left with a gurgling foal staring up at them.
The thing is... Twilight can't turn her back.
While Twilight is figuring out how to turn their dear friend back to normal Discord is left in charge of caring for the foal Fluttershy. What could possibly go wrong?
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Cute and funny story! Imagine the look an Discord's face when Fluttershy tells him!
5277589 Assuming she works up the courage to do so, and doesn't faint. Which is a very distinctive possibility.
5277621 Yes, it is.
If not Flutters, than who will tell him?
5277627 Probably either Twilight (if she feels like telling him) or Pinkie Pie (assuming she knows, and even then she may still decide to mess with Discord for the fun of it.)
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Hmm. Maybe Angel Bunny? His squeaks may be hard to understand but I think he'd be the only willing one to sit down and explain the situation to Discord
5277660 Discord could probably use his magic to translate what he says. But how would a bunny know where foals come from? I mean, bunnies mate, but for he knows pony mating rituals might be different.
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True, true. But you never know, Angel is rather wise for a small fluffy creature. Maybe he already asked Fluttershy the question long ago? and now has the knowledge to pass it onto Discord
1) You're going to take Fluttershy, who is, well, and then de-age her into a baby? Don't you know how dangerous that is?
2) Anypony else enjoyed the abuse Discord suffered by Fluttershy? Methinks Twilight tolled old Dissy good and proper. Why else would she entrust Foalshy in his paw and claw?
CUTE! Discord is best villian.
5277979 He most likely dose know what sex is, but I don't think he would stay with a mare after they had sex, at least, not long enough to see her get pregnant.
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5278414 If it weren't for the fact that this story is rated Everyone, I would gladly like to ask how such a thing would be possible. (Please don't reply to this comment, I don't think people want to click on this story and read a bunch of comments about something not G rated.)
Aw~ This is such a cute story! I like how Twilight and Discord are like the odd couple here. ^_^
5281684 As in, Twilight's the one who forces the child onto the other parent and sticks them with the responsibility of babysitting.
5282415 Ha! Pretty much. ;3
5277679 Great story. I was hoping we got to see Angel forced to help take care of Foalershy as well, but at least now we know where he learned to be a fussy eater!
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Thankyou! Haha yep.
I wasn't sure if I should add Angel. I thought it might make the story a little too long. Plus I think Angel would of bailed haha.
It's so amazing to be getting so many lovely comments!
I'm really glad people enjoyed the story! I didn't hold a lot of faith in it tbh ahe. But it makes me so so so happy to see the amazing feedback! You're all so nice 
5282823 Angel taking care of a foal? Would he even know how?
5282941 Maybe not, but then neither did Discord, so it would definitely be funny.
5282964 Yeah. And hopefully it would teach him not to take his master for granted.
5282968 I've always thought of Angel as Fluttershy's anti-Jiminy Cricket, trying to look out for her own interests while she worries about everyone else. It seems like it was Angel's idea to get Fluttershy tickets to the Gala, and he did once save the town (in a comic book). That said, he clearly prioritizes things Angel > Fluttershy > everyone else, and it would be great to see a frantic Angel making a fancy dish for Fluttershy, only for the foal to throw a tantrum and overturn the dish on his head.
5283040 It'd be funny to see him try to change a diaper.
For Discord that was pretty.....Chaotic.
I'm laughing
Um...that stuff can kill a baby so...
Loved it. Hilarious!
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He's Discord. He will feed a baby whatever he wants to feed to a baby. Heck, he could even feed a horse to a baby.
Very fun
Nice job
Poor discord!!!
Well all the qualifications are here. I say he can do whatever he wants (p.s. if I ever was forced to fill out a resume for a job I didn't want I would put this on it)
truly beautiful! encore encore!