Sonata Dusk had finally had it. All she did was follow Adagio and Aria around, trying to use their music to take over. And it had failed for the last time. She wanted to be away from them and all the humans there, but the trip back to Equestria didn't go as planned. Now what does Sonata do when she founds out she isn't just in a world of more humans, but those who also know about her for some reason?
My first fic. I've been wanting to write one for some time, and just hadn't any ideas that I wanted to
explore. This one I think might work. No real story is planned, so no clue when this will be over. Loosely based off my own life. Hope you enjoy the ride!
Thanks to Darknight293 for the find of the art.
Chapters (13)
this is good so far..BUT WHY!!! WHY THE NAME BRAD! all i see is human sentrys face now...also if you are named brad then i shall assume you look like flash sentry until other wise told.
5217781 As I said before, it is loosely based off my life. The name I am given is Brad, therefore it is the characters' name. Don't worry, I am working on a description of him to clear up any confusion so I am not assumed to be a tanned blue-haired guitarist.
5218158 hurray for descriptions. also i do believe Sonata is best pon..hum..err..mythical being? never even seen EQ:RR. only looked up a scene to see what she sounds like. also brad isnt a bad name per say..its just flash sentry kinda ruined the name for everyone. but as long as you dont look like him in real life then i wont have to throw you in a woodchipper.
...This idea...
is...
...so...
5236487 Thank you very much.
best confession NA. that and i would never expect someone watching a cartoon character would be watching a movie with herself in it. that and what will the next chapter be like... *cue the morning after happening even though nothing happened*
for some reason when the door opened i imagined sparkles and rainbows to quietly fly out the room and a bear in a tutu in the corner kissing a llama..my mind went somewhere odd...
5236509 Don't worry, I have things planned. For once.
5236576 Um...OK? Lol, it was only for the dramatic opening of a room.
5234591 just keep going, lets see if you really are that bad at interpreting or if you get better
Just finished this chapter and I have to say, I'd like to know how Sonata reacts to watching her own defeat on tape.
5239715 It'll be interesting, and I hope you like it.
Wow, she's taking this remarkably well. Can't wait to see where this goes!
Aww, you're not stupid, Sonata, you're adorable!
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.. . *WILL EDIT COMMENT AFTER WATCHING SAID MOVIE TODAY*
well its off to third party site to watch the movie on...
*start of edit*
yeah... after watching the movie i realized something, that there were 3 dimensions required for the portal between equis and earth (fiction)... with the middle man being earth... wait either this explains why sonata ended up on earth, or was a hidden fourth wall break not done by pinkie pie.
*end of edit*
5241301 I ain't no Carl!
5242093 I hope to make an explanation at some point how she gets to Earth, but I have no clue when.
OH GOD..THE STEPS! EVERYONE RUNNNN!
5243136 Yep, and they'll be shown soon. Fear them and all they steppy-ness.
. . . here it comes... the wtf moment by the annoying roommates/step brothers.
RUUUUN! THE STEPS ARE COMING!
In all honesty, I'm surprised how many of you are excited to see the steps.
AAAAAAAHHH GOD RUNN!!!!
LE STEPS ARE COMING!!!
This made me laugh sooo much!
Oh, god, not the stepbrothers!
ok so, I really can't shake it off... SUCH BRAD.
very Sentry, much Flash.
I love how you depict Sona as actually wanting to be a human all this time and was just going along for the ride because her body needed the food. (great that she was also still a bit evil. in that last part when you showed their defeat and that she enjoyed the ride even if she was still rooting to be a human.)
Typos here and there but not too much that can break immersion. I like it.. Will see if you play the "I'm thousands of years old" card in the next few chapters, because more than half the stories about the Dazzlings don't even touch on that subject, much less use it, and at times disregard it entirely. Even if the story itself is good. Its just sad that they choose to see that they don't use that subject very often.
First of... nice work. but now to answer the reason for the blueness of sonata. also is it 2 am or 2 pm now in the story?
Stepbrothers are awful.
I don't have them but I bet they are. 
Also, from what I'm reading so far, seems that you decided to not use the "I'm thousands of years old" card because Sonata was very agitated by that phrase that talked about killing someone, and I'm pretty sure that if you've lived a few thousand years, you won't be bothered to much when someone uses that as a metaphor.
Still rooting that you use it in later chapters. on with the reading
I'm not really into stories where a fictional character falls in love with a real person, but I guess I can make this one exception. You caught my attention. Just make sure to double check for spelling and grammar. Keep at it though.
5246199 Well, afternoon. It's kinda gone past the 2pm mark, but still.
5246256 I wish I knew how to use the concept properly, and then could possibly try it. There's so much I could do with the concept, that it's hard to find a right balance. Also, thanks for the mention of the grammatical mistakes, going back to correct them now.
5246256 Also it is set in dear old Britain, so there may be a few things you find that are there for colloquial references, if nothing else. We Brits have some weird ones at times.
really dislike the steps
I love how you made Sonata the sane one here.
That is all
"My mom had an active social life with a Smurf."
It's a nice story so far. It's fun to read but yeah brad wasn't the greatest choice of a name. Still good work.
Good story some grammar errors here and there but overall a good read.good luck with writing the rest
"So.why are you blue?" OMG that made me laugh so much. Nice little line to add at the end
5253594 Thanks for the feedback; I know that it's not perfect, but I do try to make it work.
5258767 More realistic world. It's based on our world, so I feel it's only fitting.
a sonata cosplay....who is doing the cosplay? are you cos if so then we all demand pictures.
5272993 I did, but I have no pics.
5273051
how well did you pull it off? cos i know some guys who are able to pull off a female characters look better than actual females 
heh a buddy of mine was convinced by his girlfriend to wear her dress. apparently she got jealous that he pulled it off better than her.
5273153 Apparently quite well. People were very impressed by my feminine side. All it took was a wig, a skirt, and 3 and a half hours of shaving.
5273180 3 and a half...wow. gotta ask, why and where did you cosplay and why as sonata?
5273338 My school. It was a charity event where you went in as a movie character, so I went in as one. Also, not really sure why Sonata. I had to get a costume from scratch anyway, so I figured I'd do it for one I actually liked. A lot.
5273369 thats awsome. well now you can stroll through malls and other places as sonata
5273382
Thank god the steps took it well. And a Sonata cosplay, huh? Cool!