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Chelis
Writer/Admin/Title VII requirement for Horse News; humanized/equestria girls fanfic writer. Pardon my grit
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Five Guys, Burgers and Lies?
I fully expect the sequel to be called Sonata Dusk and the Taco Belle.
5226502 Give us drama, give us lies...
Will there be complimentary peanuts?
Five guys burgers and fries, please believe Kotaku's lies! I'm the victim give me a prize, my bank account will swell in size!
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Beautiful.
Simply beautiful.
~Skeeter The Lurker
At first, I was like, "Someone's being a little topical". Then I noticed who the author was, and the surprise disappeared.
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Story idea and title was probably a month before that entire thing happened.
should of written it sooner to make me look like a wizard lol
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And pretzels? AIRPLANE FOOOOOD!
danmit , i was totally hopping this was a pony story about that lol.....
also links to all the original pics?....
Ugh, this plays out like a bad pornography movie.
I don't know whether or not Coco's awareness of the situation is funny or sad.
Dear God, this is the third time this has happened. How long has it been since Coco got laid?
So, review time.
Overall, the pacing felt a bit rushed, but that's fine as nothing beyond the Soarin chapter exceeded 1,000 words. The part that bothers me is the "could of" stuff; it's "could have". Also there are times where it felt easier to put "could feel" rather than *shudder* "could of felt". Also, really short chapters so that's a toss-up for me.
Does it have anything to do with a lack of shields?
5228792 Too long apparently.
Stop thinking about things dear, with the day you've had this is tame.
Maybe I'll chalk it up to her past "interviews" but dammit Trederhoof, can't you even please a girl right? I wonder if this was Rarity's experience as well
5512267 Apparently. I mean I may not have a lot of experience when it comes to sexual encounters with females (
unfortunately) but I think after 4 of 5 times you'd be all out of sexual stamina.
Not really. I think it's funny.
well this is definitely going in my WTF folder