Love Is In Bloom

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After the wedding of Shining Armor and Princess Candace, Princess Luna tries to decide how to tell Twilight Sparkle about her feelings for her, but things quickly take a different, but interesting turn...

Cover done by me.

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Bandy

Bandy #1 · Apr 25th, 2012 · · ·

This story is made slightly less D'awwful because of all the grammar/spelling errors.

DreZoma

DreZoma #2 · Apr 25th, 2012 · · ·

TwiLuna

wubstep pony

wubstep pony #3 · Apr 25th, 2012 · · ·

I like it! It's cute and short with only a few spelling mistakes. Keep up the good work.

Recon

Recon #4 · Apr 25th, 2012 · · ·

The reference to the song name caught my attention. Seeing as Luna is my favorite character along with Dash, this looks very interesting. Added to my read later list.

Hobbestc

Hobbestc #5 · Apr 25th, 2012 · · ·

The concept was cute but this was incredibly hard to read. You need to get a proofreader.

Sam Cole

Sam Cole #6 · Apr 25th, 2012 · · ·

I'm happy to see someone else that doesn't hate on Twilight, too much of that I think.

OminousBrony

OminousBrony #7 · Apr 25th, 2012 · · ·

Fix the grammatical errors and you have a winner of a story.

Mister Morden

Mister Morden #8 · Apr 26th, 2012 · · ·

Seriously, good story. But please, please fix the grammar/spelling errors. I will seriously do it for you because reading this was like mental speed bumps. The story is good but every mistake jolted me out of enjoying the story.

To be fair... I am slightly OCD about this sort of thing. Good story though!

Juu50x

Juu50x #9 · Apr 26th, 2012 · · ·

501292 Wow. I didn't know that my grammar was that bad or maybe not that bad
And you would really proofread this? I would be honored, as I'm quite aware about my grammar mistakes since english isn't my first language.

Dan50

Dan50 #10 · Apr 26th, 2012 · · ·

Would LOVE to see the mane 6's and Celly's reaction :D and then maybe the Luna/Twi wedding!!!!!!!

dlazerous

dlazerous #11 · Apr 26th, 2012 · · ·

I would love to see a part two of this.

Juu50x

Juu50x #12 · Apr 26th, 2012 · · ·

502863 Sorry, but there isn't going to be any sequels for this

But there is going to be a full TwiLuna story after I'm done with "Recalling the Nightmare"
Story will be named "Stardust".

dlazerous

dlazerous #13 · Apr 26th, 2012 · · ·

503016
YAY

soulwinds

soulwinds #14 · May 5th, 2012 · · ·

503016 really? Perhaps i'll keep an eye out for it...

ZeldaTheSwordsman

ZeldaTheSwordsman #15 · May 12th, 2012 · · ·

Hee hee, very nicely done. I think most future shipping fics about Twi and either of the Royal Sisters are going to have to feature Cadence in some way. No way would a love goddess like her not be able to tell.

FlamingMane

FlamingMane #16 · May 21st, 2012 · · ·

Second reading and it's still awesome ^^

That1Brony

That1Brony #17 · Jun 8th, 2012 · · ·

Loved the concept behind it. It made my heart start to ache around the middle part when I thought Luna wasn't going to be able to share her feelings. I don't want to sound like a broken record of everypony else, but there are just so many grammar mistakes! Besides the mistakes in grammar and spelling, I thought it was good. It's hard to find good TwiLuna stories that AREN'T mature.

Juu50x

Juu50x #18 · Jun 9th, 2012 · · ·

716584 Thanks! And yeah, I've had my share of mentioning about my grammar mistakes, and I thought that my proof reader had most of them fixed...
But it's still good to know that people are able to enoy my stories even if they have some errors.

And that's funny because I haven't seen that much any TwiLuna mature stories. Maybe I'm not looking from right places, but why would start looking for clopfics any way?