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Breakfast With My Sister

Every Friday morning, Luna is to spend her time with her sister, as accordance with their weekly ritual. As Celestia tries to spice up their morning breakfast with a new treat Luna has never tried. Things tend to get out of hoof.

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Fonypan

Fonypan #1 · Oct 24th, 2014 · 1 · ·

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Awesomo3000

Awesomo3000 #2 · Oct 24th, 2014 · · ·

LUNA WANT DONUTS!!!

i_am_the_jam

i_am_the_jam #3 · Oct 24th, 2014 · · ·

Is that it?

Yurah

Yurah #4 · Oct 24th, 2014 · · ·

5182316 yes

bobbananaville

bobbananaville #5 · Jan 27th, 2015 · · ·

You sure you mean 'replicable' not 'replaceable'?
Actually, that entire last paragraph is a bit awkward, grammatically.
And there isn't really much of anything going on in this story. Nothing exceptionally fluffy, no conflict beyond 'Ahmg, Luna loves donuts so much that Celly needs to blame it on the guards', nothing that really makes it worth reading. Nothing bad about it, but it's not very good either.
I like the idea of a weekly breakfast ritual, though. ~~Though I'd have thought that Luna slept through the day and awoke in the evening.~~ Skimmed through that paragraph. Sorry.

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