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1939 angry gryphons. The world at war. Only the strong and valiant will survive. This is a story I am writing because I just wanted to put another clean, (hopefully) entertaining story out there for ponies to read. The T rating is for violence, I guess, and because the word "War" is in the title. I dedicate this to everypony who takes the time to read my stories, and to all my friends who give me a well-needed kick to the caboose whenever I don't feel like writing another chapter.
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I'm writing this story just because I can. I've always wanted to try my hoof at writing epic battlefic. So please, give me your feedback so I will continue writing this story
I've always thought Pinkie had ADHDHD
Attention Deficit Hyperactivity Disorder in High Definition
Anyway, your grammar and spelling are okay. Your description could use some work to be more eye-catching and get more people to read.
Nice
Angel's Calling - Sabaton
if this is truly set in ww2, i want to see a few German gryphons, and Ponyville be Paris with an underground resistence movement led by twilight
but for getting me interested, have a success mustache
@totallynotabrony Thanks for the assessment. If it's popular demand,I could create a longer description; however; I did purposely endow this one with a intentional terseness.
Thank you everypony for your feedback; I will post new chapters as I am able. Although I did not set the story in WWII, you have already noticed a few obvious parallels. Bro hoofs and Smiles.
-X.F.
New chapter!!! Your shredding criticism and snide comments please. Oh, and if you actually thought any part of my fumbled storyline was mildly entertaining, that would be nice too. Thanks for all your compliments and observations so far, keep it up and I will! Keep writing. If you want me to. Actually if you don't I probably will anyway. So you're pretty much stuck with me. Love y'all.
(you're going to love me!)
--X.F.
I think you might be misspelling Pinkie Pie. It's with an "ie", not a "y" I believe.
Otherwise, this is a great story. The Cupcakes reference was brilliant. I'm going to follow this.
BTW, if you actually get to writing about the actual events of the war, I'll be listening to this while reading: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WOPEbIIQRRI