Luna performs a once-in-a-lifetime event on a clear night.
Based on the real astronomical "Harvest Moon" event.
Alternate universe: The transformation into Nightmare Moon has not happened.
Cover art by Silverlinings.
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I enjoy the way that Luna takes pride in her artistry in creating the Harvest Moon! Being a cooperative sort of person, I like the idea that alunar eclipse can only happen if the sun, earth, and moon are aligned, making Celestia part of Luna's masterwork (in a subordinate role).
As always, well done and thank you!
Nicely done! A very good story, a few errors here and there, but everyone makes a mistake every now and then! I liked it very much, thank you for writing!
~TheEmpressEclipse~
Nice story! I would have preferred it be linger, but I enjoyed it nonetheless. I spotted a few mistakes, though. I won't be able to point them all out, but you used "thy" in place of "my" a few times. That is incorrect. "Thy" is a second person possessive.