Party Girl

Parties start and end differently each time, but who would have guessed Pinkie would wake up the next morning with two more of herself.

Story inspired by The Party Song, by Aviators

Chapters (5)

Party On · 22nd Oct 2014 · 4,554 words
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Seeing Triple · 4th Nov 2014 · 4,699 words
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Just a Taste · 13th Dec 2014 · 5,647 words
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Tearful Nightmare · 25th Feb 2015 · 4,285 words
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Protector · 28th Mar 2015 · 4,188 words
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FadFreaky

FadFreaky #1 · Nov 4th, 2014 · · · Seeing Triple ·

Well it's alright, I mean we haven't really gotten to see these characters developed to a real degree yet. Characters seem to be in-character and while you do a lot of telling instead of showing, it was a good read for what content you have now, I await the next update.

Digital Ghost

Digital Ghost #2 · Nov 5th, 2014 · · · Seeing Triple ·

5228078 Thanks for the feedback. I'll work on doing more showing than telling next chapter.

lazyreader19

lazyreader19 #3 · Nov 9th, 2014 · · · Seeing Triple ·

I'm enjoying it, though I hate it when something cryptic is happening and I have to wait for it to come out. I'm impatient XP

Digital Ghost

Digital Ghost #4 · Nov 9th, 2014 · 1 · · Seeing Triple ·

5245197 Sorry, I have yet to find the line between a good amount of mystery and just being mean, so thanks for sticking around

lazyreader19

lazyreader19 #5 · Nov 9th, 2014 · · · Seeing Triple ·

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Curse you author! *shakes fist into the air dramatically*

Digital Ghost

Digital Ghost #6 · Nov 9th, 2014 · 1 · · Seeing Triple ·

5246488 *Que maniacal laughter and lightning bolts*

lazyreader19

lazyreader19 #7 · Nov 9th, 2014 · · · Seeing Triple ·

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*fades to black*

Damn, you really can't follow that up with anything but fading out. Impressive.
YOUR IMPRESSIVENESS CANNOT LAST YOU FOREVER DEAR AUTHOR!

Digital Ghost

Digital Ghost #8 · Nov 9th, 2014 · · · Seeing Triple ·

5246516 Is that a challenge, dear reader?

lazyreader19

lazyreader19 #9 · Nov 9th, 2014 · · · Seeing Triple ·

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Mayhaps it is. But the real question isn't if it is, but how would you intend to respond if it were?
Constant vigilance is a virtue, let us see if you exhibit it.