"Secrete yourselves aboard. It will take you where you need to go."
Secrete: to ooze from a cell or orifice. Did you mean secret yourselves aboard? I'm glad to see this back in action, though. Loving the new Flam, looking forward to the Gemtowne fracas.
1461080 Nah, I'm just sleep-drunk right now, and apparently using an incomplete dictionary. Aad the Flim-flams with their "brother-of-mine" and travelling salespony dress honestly belong in the 1870-1905 era of mannerism and speech. I was just wholly unaware of that usage. Thanks for educating me, I guess.
I'm a little confused by that exchange, and several other things in the story, but it's good. I want to see more. It started out okay, with Chrysalis being ejected, finding Trixie, and then follow Sinisteed, and how he survived the blast, but then it sort of ground to a halt and diverted. I expected it to go, that Sinisteed would pick Cadance as the queen (since she ejected Chrysalis, it was Shining's blast but she gave him the power required) and would follow them both as a royal guard, or maybe even revealing himself as a Changeling, and explaining to save himself, even when she kissed him throught the jelly, I thought that would have sealed it for him. When Shining Armour caught him (having seen them) the way it was said I thoguht he would either make light of it, or Cadance would say that SHining was just for her or something similar, but instead you arced it off with a berating, an OOC whore Cadance and what I though was a pointless shot at Falling for Fluttershy. I wasn't to fussed with the last part, it was an okay touch of Flutters usaing her stare and finind out he was a Changeling (or at least that's what it seemed). Then however you deemed it nescessary to divert the story further, by killing Princess Celestia, and possibly Rainbowdash, while also bringing in Discord, but I'm thinking that was just for the joke of having him try to dodge the 'problem' of a Goddess and a supersonic Equine making street pizza of him, and themselves. As for the Trixie(s) part of the storyline, It was okay, and made sense, until you got to the confrontation with Flim, at which he was asking why they left, and that they should go back, with little continuation or backing. It just seemed a little confusing, and perhaps could have been more. Though I hope furhter down the line Flim survives and they rescue the ponies from the Diamond Dogs. Other than the nonsensical story-line, which I'm following, it's a great story, and i hope to see more of it soon Keep it up. Honora Imperator
“Trixie is well aware of the 'FlimFlam' Brothers, whose reputation does indeed pursue them. I wonder how fast you've had to canter out of towns to keep it from proceeding you?”
From anypony else that would be an insult. From Trixie... lol, burn.
What i thought when i saw the title "Madame butterfly" images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20120309021617/bayonetta/images/a/a6/MadamaButterflyfull.jpg Freaking Bayonetta, man...
Secrete: to ooze from a cell or orifice. Did you mean secret yourselves aboard?
I'm glad to see this back in action, though. Loving the new Flam, looking forward to the Gemtowne fracas.
Kind of depressing, how gaunt and hollow Flam is.
Also, Sinisteed is totally getting alicorn booty. Go, you.
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vb
(tr) to put in a hiding place
[variant of obsolete secret to hide away; see secret (n)]
Collins English Dictionary – Complete and Unabridged © HarperCollins Publishers 1991, 1994, 1998, 2000, 2003
My writing, does, I admit, date from circa 1870 - but maybe I should change it anyway, for a modern audience?
J,
1461080 Nah, I'm just sleep-drunk right now, and apparently using an incomplete dictionary. Aad the Flim-flams with their "brother-of-mine" and travelling salespony dress honestly belong in the 1870-1905 era of mannerism and speech. I was just wholly unaware of that usage. Thanks for educating me, I guess.
I'm a little confused by that exchange, and several other things in the story, but it's good. I want to see more.
It started out okay, with Chrysalis being ejected, finding Trixie, and then follow Sinisteed, and how he survived the blast, but then it sort of ground to a halt and diverted. I expected it to go, that Sinisteed would pick Cadance as the queen (since she ejected Chrysalis, it was Shining's blast but she gave him the power required) and would follow them both as a royal guard, or maybe even revealing himself as a Changeling, and explaining to save himself, even when she kissed him throught the jelly, I thought that would have sealed it for him. When Shining Armour caught him (having seen them) the way it was said I thoguht he would either make light of it, or Cadance would say that SHining was just for her or something similar, but instead you arced it off with a berating, an OOC whore Cadance and what I though was a pointless shot at Falling for Fluttershy. I wasn't to fussed with the last part, it was an okay touch of Flutters usaing her stare and finind out he was a Changeling (or at least that's what it seemed). Then however you deemed it nescessary to divert the story further, by killing Princess Celestia, and possibly Rainbowdash, while also bringing in Discord, but I'm thinking that was just for the joke of having him try to dodge the 'problem' of a Goddess and a supersonic Equine making street pizza of him, and themselves. As for the Trixie(s) part of the storyline, It was okay, and made sense, until you got to the confrontation with Flim, at which he was asking why they left, and that they should go back, with little continuation or backing. It just seemed a little confusing, and perhaps could have been more. Though I hope furhter down the line Flim survives and they rescue the ponies from the Diamond Dogs.
Other than the nonsensical story-line, which I'm following, it's a great story, and i hope to see more of it soon
Keep it up.
Honora Imperator
From anypony else that would be an insult. From Trixie... lol, burn.
Welll, I am not sure if I like where this is going....