heh heh. pretty funny but I have to wonder where you're going with this Sinisteed guy. Is he going to have much plot involvement or just be around for a laugh now and then?
Ah, that would be telling. Although because he is an OC, he won't be as important as the mane characters (Trixie, Chrysalis et al), and his primary interactions will be with the mane characters (Cadance, Shining Armor, Princess Celestia, Twilight etc etc).
He was also a way to provide a new perspective on the fight - seen in the episode - which is featured in chapter one.
PS: It's unlikely chapters will normally be posted with this frequency. This chapter was effectively front half of the back half of chapter four (the third-quarter, if you're counting), which snapped off which chapter four got too long. Then I fell in love with the idea of ending the chapter with Twilight's arrival, so the fourth quarter of chapter four, which isn't fully written yet, has gotten pushed into chapter six.
I like Sinisteed, his way of thinking and pondering is so different from a pony, it's really fun to see how different the writing is when it's from his pov. Great portrayal of the changelings so far, I always tread carefully into Changeling fics because I think people want to "redeem" Chrysalis. Rather than explore her strange ways of thinking and inability (if we should believe the song) to love. It really makes me wonder how this all will end, and I really do hope for the best for dear dear Trixie. Good Job!
To be brutally honest, I'm here for the Sinisteed chapters. I really hope you have more of him reliving and musing on Changeling life, because I love those parts.
Commence deranged laughter.....which isn't a good idea when you have a semi-sore throat and currently prone to fits of coughing. Once again nicely done.
You can still do it. Or, if you prefer, email me your concept and I'll tell you if it is the same as I had planned (on the other hand, if it's better I will steal it )
I would say I laughed my ass off.... but I didn't. Just grinning like a maniac.
I like Sinisteed, it's even better that he isn't a pervert. (I will laugh my ass off, or stop and go to a pyschiatrist, if Sinisteed turns out to be a girl [mare, some bug term, etc.] depended on how he changes)
Hilarious chapter!!
And also made me feel awkward.
"How long have you been standing there?"
......
You mean, Twilight just heard the, ahem, other version of her and Cadance's secret hoofshake?
THIS. IS. GLORIOUS!...ly awkward, but still!
I DEMAND MOAR!!!
heh heh.
pretty funny but I have to wonder where you're going with this Sinisteed guy. Is he going to have much plot involvement or just be around for a laugh now and then?
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Ah, that would be telling. Although because he is an OC, he won't be as important as the mane characters (Trixie, Chrysalis et al), and his primary interactions will be with the mane characters (Cadance, Shining Armor, Princess Celestia, Twilight etc etc).
He was also a way to provide a new perspective on the fight - seen in the episode - which is featured in chapter one.
PS: It's unlikely chapters will normally be posted with this frequency. This chapter was effectively front half of the back half of chapter four (the third-quarter, if you're counting), which snapped off which chapter four got too long. Then I fell in love with the idea of ending the chapter with Twilight's arrival, so the fourth quarter of chapter four, which isn't fully written yet, has gotten pushed into chapter six.
JMH
I like Sinisteed, his way of thinking and pondering is so different from a pony, it's really fun to see how different the writing is when it's from his pov.
Great portrayal of the changelings so far, I always tread carefully into Changeling fics because I think people want to "redeem" Chrysalis.
Rather than explore her strange ways of thinking and inability (if we should believe the song) to love.
It really makes me wonder how this all will end, and I really do hope for the best for dear dear Trixie.
Good Job!
To be brutally honest, I'm here for the Sinisteed chapters. I really hope you have more of him reliving and musing on Changeling life, because I love those parts.
and thus Twilight is scarred for life.
ps, can't wait to see where you take this
Commence deranged laughter.....which isn't a good idea when you have a semi-sore throat and currently prone to fits of coughing.
Once again nicely done.
Not only do I like Sinisteed, I feel immense sympathy for the poor git after he's gone through THAT (also, Twilight)
Twilight is watching you go down on her brother.
She approves.
if this was a clop fic..........................threesome
p.s. THIS CHAPTER IS BUCKING HILARIOUSE!
Dammit, I was just thinking about writing a story that I think is probably pretty much the exact same concept as this story.
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You can still do it. Or, if you prefer, email me your concept and I'll tell you if it is the same as I had planned (on the other hand, if it's better I will steal it )
Yours,
JMH
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XD
/collapses roflmao
I would say I laughed my ass off.... but I didn't. Just grinning like a maniac.
I like Sinisteed, it's even better that he isn't a pervert. (I will laugh my ass off, or stop and go to a pyschiatrist, if Sinisteed turns out to be a girl [mare, some bug term, etc.] depended on how he changes)