Looking towards the Sunset

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UnbelievablyDeadCultist

UnbelievablyDeadCultist #4 · Nov 18th, 2014 · · · Chapter 2 ·

That sounds like a realy good story i realy like it :)

2x #5 · Nov 22nd, 2014 · · · Chapter 2 ·

I like Rowe's attire as a ranger its more badass looking

Wolf-bloodmoon

Wolf-bloodmoon #6 · Nov 23rd, 2014 · · · Chapter 2 ·

5299200 In the actual game it is in the DLC honest hearts

2x #7 · Nov 23rd, 2014 · · · Chapter 2 ·

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Thanks for letting me know but I still like his attire though. can't wait for chapter 3

2x #8 · Jan 13th, 2015 · 1 · · Chapter 3 ·

awwww

Crow D Reaper

Crow D Reaper #9 · Jan 21st, 2015 · · · Chapter 3 ·

I love this can't wait to see what happens next

Hard Cider

Hard Cider #10 · May 1st, 2015 · · · Chapter 4 ·

You have my attention. I feel like you brought in the romance too fast. Maybe wait when there was room for conflict and character growth. There's also the problem of grammatical errors everwhere, but that usually don't matter (to me) if the grammar isn't too bad (or too many run on sentences). As long as the story is good, everything is good. If your familiar with fallout weaponry, red glare, riot shotgun, and "the special" LAER rifle for the win!!!! (My weapons of choice in hardcore mode.)

p.s. explosives and energy weapons for the win!!!!!

Wolf-bloodmoon

Wolf-bloodmoon #11 · May 1st, 2015 · · · Chapter 4 ·

5926264 Well you will like Wolf then When it comes to explosives

Hard Cider

Hard Cider #12 · May 1st, 2015 · · · Chapter 4 ·

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well, it's not like wolf owns/has the "special" grenade machine-gun, "special" rocket launcher, or the red glare, am i right?
Have you played any of the games of the fallout franchise? I've only played fallout 3 & fallout new Vegas. Also, i am somewhat versed in the lore of the franchise.