• Published 9th Nov 2014
  • 755 Views, 16 Comments

Looking towards the Sunset - Wolf-bloodmoon



Sunset shimmer has finally decided to head back to Equestria but she doesn't end up in Equestria.

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Comments ( 6 )

You have my attention. I feel like you brought in the romance too fast. Maybe wait when there was room for conflict and character growth. There's also the problem of grammatical errors everwhere, but that usually don't matter (to me) if the grammar isn't too bad (or too many run on sentences). As long as the story is good, everything is good. If your familiar with fallout weaponry, red glare, riot shotgun, and "the special" LAER rifle for the win!!!! (My weapons of choice in hardcore mode.)

p.s. explosives and energy weapons for the win!!!!!

5926264 Well you will like Wolf then When it comes to explosives

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well, it's not like wolf owns/has the "special" grenade machine-gun, "special" rocket launcher, or the red glare, am i right? :yay:
Have you played any of the games of the fallout franchise? I've only played fallout 3 & fallout new Vegas. Also, i am somewhat versed in the lore of the franchise.

Excellent story. Cant wait to c what happens next.:pinkiehappy:

I love this story plz continue XD

The story is beautiful! Please continue more! I want to know what happens next. ^^

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