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RarityEQM
Just a pony being fabulous. Writer of vignettes, clop, experiments, a great deal of trash and the occasional gem
RarityEQM
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I think I can see why spanking is no longer an acceptable punishment.
BUT IT WORKED DAMNIT!
Why the Suspense???? Loved the story, even if it wasn't much. Twilight you naughty girl.
Them B words though
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Good writers tend to avoid alliteration.
i like your description , to bad the fic is to short to catch my interest.....
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Short fics for the clopper on the go, darling! Tis a new trend!
5145241 i can't clop in 1k words though.....
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You can do anything if you put your mind to it, darling! <3
... no, I wake up with that thought every once in a while
What is the next part? Your story says complete and you leave that for an ending? That is cruel torture author, cruel indeed.
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There actually is a chapter 2...
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Then why does only 1 appear and the story is marked as complete if this chapter 2 exist?
EG F***ing sucked!!!
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This is very true.
I really, really, really loved the spanking. That's like a trigger of my own, they're so hot.
Plus, it's focusing on their teacher/student relationship which I already love hearing it get tweaked. Pretty sweet, pretty sweet. 
Sequel?
ummm im lost was she punishing her or forplaying her im lost.
Is there a continuation or sequel as they say? Nice story anyways. I like it.
That alliteration though
Cool story
5149598 and it there is a chapter 2, how come we can't see it? 
I want a sequel.
I love Celestia holding Twilight. A spanking scene just doesn't feel right without post-spanking cuddles. I am curious about the second part of the "punishment" though.
'Twas good, despite spanking not being one of my fetishes. However, your sentence structure needs tweaking. You use semicolons where you really shouldn't, for example; a semicolon is to be used sparingly in place of a period for two connected, independent clauses (what could be considered "complete sentences"), or in place of the delimiting comma in lists whose items contain commas (i.e., "Quahog, Rhode Island; Stoolbend, Virginia; and Langley Falls, Virginia are all fictional places created by 'Fuzzy Door Productions'.").
The content and the visual imagery were very sensual, however, so have a Like.
7269721 Really? My sentence structure is what you picked up on? Not my abuse of ' and - ? I beat that grammar to death.
I'm glad you like my 'old' work. I'm still learning, and gettin' better everyday!
I go back, read this and get the weird feeling it was actually some sort of sexy roleplay Twilight's gotten really into.
Danm kind lady may we have some more.
Where's part 2?