Dark!

Holy shiiiiiii-!!!

ooh, i like where you are going Celly...

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It was sort of predictable what was going to happen after Raven was caught eavesdropping. It looks like there won't be any other of the main six? Where is Spike? No Ponyville adventures to arise? ... I suspect the sleeping dragon will be smited once he begins emitting smoke.

Best of luck, stay healthy, and update soon!

-Sky66

God...

Celestia... what's happening to you...?

5550280 Of course.

5550298 -iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit!

5550539 Someone needs to draw Celly a la Shredder.

5550299 She's got a long way to go, yet.

5551042 Official theme for Corruption, maybe?

5551437 Actually, there will be. After all, we are looking at two perspectives in this story. One being Twi and the other Celly. Naturally though, there is far more Celly than Twi, but yes, the mane six is gonna be in this. In terms of predictability of Raven's death? You just KNEW the moment Celly found her that she would do something.

5551473 Power corrupts, but in Celly's case, love for her ponies is what pushes her to the dark side...

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I approve!

After reading this chapter and thinking for a few seconds, I couldn't help but laugh. You have the good Celestia going "No, Twilight. We can't be together," and the new side basically going "Screw that! Yes we can!"

5552527 Good laugh, or bad laugh? Although I am not trying to create a good/bad Celestia split persona, I did snicker at the hypocrisy that she was trying her best to remain "teacher and student" with Twilight, to later then kill Raven just so she could have an excuse for Twilight to be at her side as her "scribe." We'll see how long that lasts.

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It was a good laugh. And I wasn't trying to imply a split personality, more like a new impulsive streak.

5552583 Precisely what I was thinking.

I am starting to really like this story. I hope Twilights love for Celestia sort of corrupts her when she learns what Celestia did but sticks with her and starts her Tryanny with her... At least I hope so. Stories like this almost always end with Twilight vs Celestia.

Also, will we be seeing any DSM updates in the near future?

5553101 DSM is struggling due to the fact the next chapter... wait I have said this for the last two chapters... but it is VERY difficult to write for. I'm struggling to get the right flow and direction, when I know what I want. The next chapter is supposed to be the ending of the battle, so I need to be careful. It reveals a lot and raises more questions... and it reveals Twilight Sparkle's total fall.

This is a Twilestia story. Twilight Vs Celestia seems to be most of the outcomes in this scenario. I want to try something different.

Also, gonna be live streaming the writing process tonight. :P And by tonight I mean in about half an hour.

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Chapter 6, yaaaaaaaay :3

I hope that Twilight can gain her teacher's love, but I also want to se more of this dark side pof the princess :3 (and more of her pseudo-locked lust/desire for her student)

Thanks for the chapter dude :D

5553112 Wait so this 'WILL' turn into a dark twilestia fic? Is this definitely going to happen? If so then YES!!! I've read a few stories where Celestia (for some reason) turns evil and Twilight becomes her enamy. There aren't enough fics where Twilight joins her. In fact I've only found one fic where that happens. It's called Eternal Devotion and only has one chapter.

I don't know why but I really like the idea of a dark/evil twilestia fic. It just seem like it would be interesting.

5632711 I can confirm it will be.

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Now this.. this is how you chart a descent into madness. Not someone waking up one day and saying "I wonder what it would feel like to disembowel my friends and strangle them all to death with each other's entrails before they can bleed out".

5634118 Hello again Hot-Pants! Glad you like this story. I hope you continue to do so. And when it comes to falling into madness? Yeah. I'm in that pit right now. I still feel Celestia's fall is a little hashed, but... maybe that's just me?

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It's certainly moving faster than, say, Grimoire but unless you're planning on writing something of similar length I'd say that the pacing is fine. She revels in her actions in the moment only for her emotional high to come crashing down as soon as that moment is over, but the after action crash gets softer over time. Tacked on to experiencing 1,000 years of horrible guilt over banishing her, I'd say that a slightly expedited fall in the aftermath of killing Luna makes sense.

It was also nice to see Discord genuinely fearing for his very life at the hooves of something nigh infinitely stronger him (in his weakened form, at least).

Woah... Celestia has gone trippy...
She is a bloodthirsty murderer now

My reaction...

“Huh?” Blinking in confusion

Yeah........Celestia just went Kilestia on everyone and all with a smile on her face

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6205939 Yes, feed me your feelings! FEEEEED ME!

6205947 wow, she going dark now but it all in the name of love......It does make me wonder how Candace is feeling about all that is happening, or what she do to Candace once lovebutt knew the two are dateing or see each other....

And Celestia is fully gone.

Or atleast 90% of her is.