With the blood of her sister on her hooves, will Celestia reach out to those closest to her in time before her own nightmare begins? Or will the unfortunate events that will unfold force Celestia down a much darker path than her sister ever took?
Very well done. Good stories should have a balance of good and bad, Do try not to go completely overboard with the grim dark or it's possible that people will lose interest.
5684895 This is as dark as this story is going to get for a while now. I've led up to this moment, but now I am going to smooth off on it a little and explore Twilight and Celestia's growing relationship.
5684972 Aye, the rushing forward into darkness with Celestia was entirely on purpose, because as ya'll know even before this story begins, in this Universe, Celestia was already brooding over the death of Luna and all it took was a little nudge to throw her onto the path of her fledgling tyrannical reign.
Twilight Sparkle on the other hand, is going to be a lot slower. She's definitely fast becoming the moral compass of this story, because she knows full well what it is they are doing is wrong, but is willing to trust (and love) Celestia enough to take the risk... even though Celestia technically is lying through her teeth with each and every word.
As I said to Heavy, the next coming chapters are lot more calmer; sure, it will be a little dark here and there, but I am very excited in exploring Twilight's advancement and these mare's growing relationship.
I also love you like this story. Brings a smile to mah face.
That's a nice pace to work at, far to many evil Twilight stories have Twilight running off the deep end, which is unrealistic when you consider the character.
Also the scenarios which have lead to the events aren't at all unrealistic and could have happened. Well at least in my opinion anyway.
Personal question to the author when this is over how are you going to make the world end? I hope end the end everyone die and the world dies please let it happen if not this would be boring?!
(So glad I waited until the second part was out to read these two chapters.)
Embracing the darkness, yes. Good, Twilight. Controlled zombie plague, absolute (or almost absolute) mind control, I can't wait to see what else. Little sad that black magic's cost semms to be your sanity, but for the powers it grants you... I mean... really, sanity is so overrated.
I suspected this would happen, but it still scared me. Twilight and Celestia are both falling into darkness.
Oh fuck... I just realized... Celestia AND Twilight have fallen to darkness...
*runs home and begins packing suit case* So um... I'm running away. It's clear to me that there is no hope for Equestria, as the most powerful pony in all of Equestria AND her equally powerful student have fallen to the darkside. So, I bid you all farewell.
*gets on the next train to Manehatten and rides off*
nightmare celestia and dark magic twilight....the world is doom, soon new world order shall come and the world it self shall bow before the come tides of darkness... but at least they have each other
Very well done. Good stories should have a balance of good and bad, Do try not to go completely overboard with the grim dark or it's possible that people will lose interest.
5684895 This is as dark as this story is going to get for a while now. I've led up to this moment, but now I am going to smooth off on it a little and explore Twilight and Celestia's growing relationship.
5684904 Good to hear.
5684903 XD Love your references, man. Has some Pinkies as a reward!
5684972 Aye, the rushing forward into darkness with Celestia was entirely on purpose, because as ya'll know even before this story begins, in this Universe, Celestia was already brooding over the death of Luna and all it took was a little nudge to throw her onto the path of her fledgling tyrannical reign.
Twilight Sparkle on the other hand, is going to be a lot slower. She's definitely fast becoming the moral compass of this story, because she knows full well what it is they are doing is wrong, but is willing to trust (and love) Celestia enough to take the risk... even though Celestia technically is lying through her teeth with each and every word.
As I said to Heavy, the next coming chapters are lot more calmer; sure, it will be a little dark here and there, but I am very excited in exploring Twilight's advancement and these mare's growing relationship.
I also love you like this story. Brings a smile to mah face.
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That's a nice pace to work at, far to many evil Twilight stories have Twilight running off the deep end, which is unrealistic when you consider the character.
Also the scenarios which have lead to the events aren't at all unrealistic and could have happened. Well at least in my opinion anyway.
Personal question to the author when this is over how are you going to make the world end? I hope end the end everyone die and the world dies please let it happen if not this would be boring?!
YAAAAAAAY
(So glad I waited until the second part was out to read these two chapters.)
Embracing the darkness, yes. Good, Twilight. Controlled zombie plague, absolute (or almost absolute) mind control, I can't wait to see what else. Little sad that black magic's cost semms to be your sanity, but for the powers it grants you... I mean... really, sanity is so overrated.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
I was just telling Darcy the other night that I hoped this was the path the story would take. Two villains in love. My favorite kind of darkfic.
Embrace the dark side of the force you don't know its true power.
I suspected this would happen, but it still scared me. Twilight and Celestia are both falling into darkness.
Oh fuck... I just realized... Celestia AND Twilight have fallen to darkness...
*runs home and begins packing suit case* So um... I'm running away. It's clear to me that there is no hope for Equestria, as the most powerful pony in all of Equestria AND her equally powerful student have fallen to the darkside. So, I bid you all farewell.
*gets on the next train to Manehatten and rides off*
nightmare celestia and dark magic twilight....the world is doom, soon new world order shall come and the world it self shall bow before the come tides of darkness... but at least they have each other
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Well, there's always this pony...
Oh wait a second. Did I just say that pony? On second thought, she'd probably join them. BUT THIS PONY, ON THE OTHER HAND, WOULD DEMOLISH THEM!
And in the background, these songs would be playing:
Now, for any song that has words in it, the words would obviously be changed to better suit the pony in question. Which, if you have forgotten, is this pony:
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Well at this point she might as well get back together with Sombra, he does return in a year or so anyways.