[aka FlutterWitch, aka MidnightChaos, aka The Witching Hour]
The Doctor has nearly fallen to an age old enemy. Escaping in the TARDIS he lands in Ponyville, but something is not right. Something is wrong. The Doctor regenerated, yes. But this Time he is the Equestria renowned DJ?
Short description. This Story is a one-shot, unless I get requests or something. Please enjoy!
Thanks to Shadowflame and Merseybeat for Editing!
Edit: Lots of requests for "Moar" So... The Doctor Dj story continues.
Now... What to name it?
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I think this represents bronies perfectly!
5091682 Huh?
What do you mean?
5091668
First of all, his comment is at the end of your story. It's not going dissuade anyone stumbling onto it and thinking foolishly that it might be decent, only to give up halfway through.
Plus the reasons we don't like it are:
a) You DROVE-BY the chat, dropping your link, and running for your little life. That endeared you to absolutely no one who takes fanfiction seriously.
b) You have no concept of even the basics of storytelling, endearing you to no one who takes writing seriously.
c) (just added) You delete comments, thus proving no one will take you seriously.
5091692
I'm in the middle of class.
I HAD to leave.
5091685
It means that if I had to pick one story to show everyone what fimfiction aspies to, it'd be this story!
5091699
I'm not sure if that's a compliment or an insult, to be completely honest.
5091706
Pssh.
You know what I mean, bby~
It should have another chapter to sorta detail it out the ending wasn't well satisfying
5091902
Alright.
I have no words... THAT WAS FREAKING AMAZING, MAN GREAT JOB. GREAT FUCKING JOB!
I'd read a sequel series.
5092059
Alright.
Two more.
5091813
This fandom isn't meant to be against anything. You and others like you probably throw around the words "love and tolerate", right?
5091813
Are you not talking down to me right now? And right after I had been so honest and caring to the fic. Sheesh, I'm already super depressed. I don't need another reason to buy some rope :(
5091692 I like how someone can act like they can talk to others like they are below them. You sir, are a living embodiment of what this website and fandom is against. Have you no humility?
5092113 sorry, wrong person....PM me...sorry didn't mean that towards you...
5092113
thanks for enjoying it.
If enough people want, I will write sequel.
5092139
forums.oce.leagueoflegends.com/board/attachment.php?attachmentid=4740&d=1380699345
5092149 You don't have to read it.
Just leave and never come back if you don't like it.
5092154
It's not about liking.
It's about the demand of BASIC quality.
I love reading fics, but when I see so incredibly short and bland fics as yours, I simply lose faith in this site. Seriously, what have my beloved bronies devolved into? Can they not learn how to write properly and THEN publish it?
Can you not think of an "somewhat" original concept? Does it have to be the most overly done one, regarding Dr. Who? Can this site not simply shower me in the radiance that is well-written fantasy made by the most glamorous of neckbeards?
When love has stopped springing from this site, and idiocy and childishness took hold, I lost my faith in bronyism and started living of cynism.
I am prepared to make an effort.
I am prepared to change something!
I am prepared to give everything it takes to bring bronydom as high up as possible and to bring it to the top of qualitywriting it can be. A community that is the elite of writers? A community, where you can stand up every morning, and see great fics created by great people for great people?
No, my dreams have been dashed by foul non-extremes that are mediocrity and early publishment.
Have you no shame releasing such an unfinished story, that you immediately can write an epilogue, because someone just wanted it?
How have you not thought about writing it before?
Have you not learned of description? The thing that allows every poor soul in here to immerse themselves in a world without hate? Without all the wars?
Yet, I will keep fighting on! I will tell you of what your stories are, of what you deserve, of what you do not deserve. This is my goal!
If you do not accept the standards of quality on this site to get popular, I will tell you so, and I did. Yet, you deleted my comment and ignored it, living in your own world where everyone loves your fic, not being able to open your eyes and seeing it as it is. Have you never laid eyes upon one of your fics and thought "ow, this is not as good as I remembered .I should have written better?"
Art is an art!
You can only improve in art by criticising yourself, thinking about what you could have done better, and by accepting criticism of others. Even if they bring it over as hard and stiff as you can imagine, you can only improve if you take the hard object that is criticism, and lick it until you find some happiness in it. Then you need to embrace it and penetrate yourself with it!
Whenever I write bad things about a fic, it pains me so much to hurt the writer, but how can we change, if we are not able to cope with this pain that is our own mistake?
I have talked enough.
I hope you a better person than what I have seen.
And I hope you will, against my estimations, bring it far!
REMEMBER:
IF YOU CAN'T SLAM WITH THE BEST, YOU JAM WITH THE REST!
5092212
This is triggering me! Please be nice!
5092212
Gods. Lot of text.
The whole Doctor becomes Vinyl Scratch is my idea. I haven't seen it else where.
Second of all. I KNOW MY WRITING SUCKS DON'T SLAM IT IN MY FACE.
5092212
. Just say what they should improve upon and the story can be edited for any grammatical or spelling errors, but if it's the storyline you're mad about, just dislike it and move on. 
Dude, chill out
The Doctor woke to the smell of smoke. Dragging himself up off the ground, he opened the door and stepped out into Ponyville. Unbeknownst to him,he didn’t quite look the same as he had before. At least, that was the case until he got up to his hooves, which were now suddenly white.
The Doctor blinked in confusion, before remembering that he’d just regenerated. Oh, well, usual day in the life of a time lord.
Deciding he would explore his new changes, he made his way to the Tardis door and opened it up. Sunlight poured in, and The Doctor found himself staring out at Ponyville. At least he had landed in the right place for a change.
You somehow had him do the same action twice friend, you may wish to correct that. That aside it was am amusing story.
this is stupider and i still like it
Moar!
Make a sequel. This is cool.
I love this, but the ending keeps becoming cliffhangers D: when you write your sequel, please give it an ending that gives it a nice wrap up. Other than that,
moustache for you good sir.
Sequel? I would read it!!