Um. Wow.
I don't think I can finish my lasagna now.
Why I was eating while reading this, I don't know but yea. I'm officially not hungry anymore.

oh god its so horrible make the blood stop!

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Wow... so all three of the CMCs got eaten. Interesting, I wonder who they ticked off to cause that.

Aw.

It lost me a bit from the start there, but good show? anyways. The ending there was...a bit too far, as well. it leaves so much unresolved, and i know its horrific smut, but it's just going too far on a lot of it, for what you set for par

I sorta wish Sweetie had been absorbed into Rarity, as Rarity fully digests her down to nutrients in her flanks, forever a part of her sister.

oh, this must be based on that one pic by shdingo, right?

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no, hard vore is only when there's chewing/biting/cooking/cutting involved. Basically, if the prey is not still alive by the time they enter the stomach.

digestion afterwards has no bearing on if it's hard or soft vore.

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You would be absolutely correct. That's precisely the inspiration for the fic.

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Hmmm... check the third chapter again, close to the end. You MAY notice something... off about something.

...slice of life? You just depicted horrific child death of three innocent kids at the hands of-I mean...the situation was contrived enough with Rarity doing it to her sister. But the others? That's not just unbelievable, it's kind of insulting to the characters. This comes off like a snuff fic. It's not satirical or funny, it's just cruel. Theres voraphile work I can recommend. This isn't one such instance.

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Umm no toilet can flush a FUCKING SKULL 💀!!