eyy b0ss ken i habe a pizzapls?
Don't get me wrong, I have hated my parents at times, and when i was young (younger than 10) I had more hate than anyone should have, not for my parents, but a lot got taken out on them, when I was mad, I never said a word, but in my head, I said some bad things.
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Is this expressing a sort of, normal for her, occurrence between her and her mom? Or, was there something else besides Scootaloo's lashing out that I'm supposed to take in?
I think we've all said at least one thing to our parents we've regretted. Poor ponies.
Not sure if it's just your style, but the golden rule is you ALWAYS capitalize "I" when addressing yourself, period. You should fix your story description up some because people take that as a sign that the rest of this story will have really bad grammar.
Also, [hr] will create a break that helps transitions and won't bleed over when people resize their screens when they zoom and just makes things look nicer. Alternatively *** or whatever, no hard-fast rule about how to break.
The story was nice. Pretty sad, and something that just happens. Nice look into why we almost never see Scoots mom. I would feel lower than dirt as Scoots likely feels there if I ever said such things to my mom.
5059795 This is only the beginning, it gets worse later, i'm working on it off the site on my PC. I will post as one huge thing when its done, this was just the start, TY for commenting though! And ty for the tip on the splitting thing, thanks!
5059795 Also, i am VERY busy working on getting my gaming community up and running, its called ✮ Starz✮, you can find it on Steam. Just bought a new PC to run it, loading it as i type this, gonna be a few hours till i work on second chapter
. But what can you do, need to make some $ :/.
Wow, Scoot's an A-hole in this.
>>The Snark Knight Rises it doesn't stop there, next chapter gets bad.
This was silly. And you should feel silly.
Also there are a multitude of spelling and grammar mistakes, but that's not really a problem compared to the silliness of this story.
Really, come back when you're better at doing dramatic things, maybe then it won't be so silly.
I respect you too, generic offspring unit. But I do not respect your grammar.
Might want to tighten up the description a bit. It doesn't give the slightest clue about the story and just sounds like the rambling thoughts of a teenager.
5079961 Yeah, writing this at 2am and arguing to get in posted, doesn't go well.
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Doing it while high goes better... Not that I'm speaking from experience or anything.
>>Pirate King Fowler
Dank Ku$h + Doritos + Mountain Dew = MLG.
Need i say more?