Steven Stone is an adventurer, a researcher, a hero, a scientist, a Pokémon right activist, a millionaire, and overall, a Pokémon lover. He has worked several years to make Earth a better world, to get rid of all the evil and the corruption that has tormented it for years. He has seen the rise of heroes and the fall of villains. And when his world seemed to be changing for the best, he left his title as Hoenn's regional champion, and left to explore the world and solve its mysteries.
Unfortunately, his look of reality was far from true. In the eyes of their own God, humanity was a plague, they had to be judged, and punished for their actions.
Earth was abandoned, and those deemed worthy were transported to a magical planet in a completely different universe, Equus.
Steven now finds himself with his trusty, yet cold and soulless companion; a pony thief in the search for adventure and a tendency to attract problems; a sarcastic, negative, disrespectful and almost-suicidal Sylveon; and far many other unusual characters he'd never thought he'd befriend. He'll travel far and wide in search for answers, as he also tries to convince a stubborn almighty being from changing his mind. Just another Tuesday for the former Champion
(Contains swearing and sex references)
Notes:
A side story of "A New World, a New Way" by Zeusdemigod131. Look for it if you want to give it a read, it's awesome!
Oh and by the way. English isn't my main language, so if I make any mistakes, or if I could replace some words or phrase to make it look better, then put it on the comments and I´ll see if I can fix it.
Huge thanks to Madacon for the cover pic. He's an amazing artist and such a great guy!
looking good.
..poor Stephen...everyone knows Scizor can't learn fly
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Steven cries at night because he can't soar the skies...
(That is not cannon, goes against his character, but I like imagining that.)
well..that could of gone better...
heh...space tarterus
and thus the sylvion joined the party
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Haha, you live up to your name, don't you? Seeing someone as active and positive as you always makes me smile
Thanks for passing by, I hope you enjoyed the changes!
ur style of writing is still somewhat questionable in my opinion, and u have a nasty habit of using the word 'on' instead of 'in', but....
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Guilty... I'll try to fix that in the future, I'm slowly learning. Hopefully I'll become a better writer in the future
5791823 if i may, a trick that i use is that after i write something i dont start to edit it myself until about a week has passed after i finish it, three days at the absolute minimum...just long enough that im no longer familar with what i wrote myself. i find that i catch a lot more of my errors that way...
5791842 I should try that... thanks for the advice
Ahh, it's done. Funny that Steven doesn't know that Scizor can't fly. I thought he specialized in steel types. Hmm, well technically they can fly, but only if they use strong upwards air currents for assistance.
He, I must have missed that the first time. It's actually good to see a Pokemon that's willing to stand up to their own trainer, in contrast to most that just obey.
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i wonder if he can use moves to create the updraft? i.e i think Scizor can use Arial ace?
Humble aliens aren't that rare. Are they?
Where the hell did that Sylveon come from? Putting up that much of a fight against a champion level pokemon that has a type advantage is not natural. Does the 4-move limit apply? I always thought that was just a gameplay mechanic for balance purposes, you'd think that for Pokemon, learning moves is no different from learning natural skills.
It's only occurred to me now that you've rewrote this, but now that you've rewrote this, all my previous comments are gone.
5792367 Sorry for the comments .-. I didn't know that
As for Frederick... mehehehehee
Won't spoil it out :p
I totally heard this in the Pokemon series narrator's voice as I read it. So if that was your intention, well done. Also most people spell Equs with two u's.
This is the minute amount of OCD I have talking, so feel free to disregard it. If you are going to keep doing these at the end, please be consistent in format and bold them so I can more easily hear it in my head as a Pokemon series narrator voice-over. (See my comment in the previous chapter if this confuses you.)
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About your first comment
My mistake >_> Fixed. And thanks, I was trying to give that reaction.
About your second comment
Yeah.... not my best one, changed it, and hopefully fixed it, but I will try to do better ones in the future
Nice!
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Same here!
Did ya delete one of your chapters?
5817043 HOLY BUTTS
For some reason it unpublished a chapter >_>
Soooo...they will be going to the Everfree huh?
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OH HELL NO
Uses Frederick as a meat shield
Frederick: Put me down you asshole
NO IF I GO DOWN, YOU GO DOWN FIRST
5824720 Ps. I love the Everfree fic madness :p
great chapter as ususal
I must like Fox too much, I always feel like people are idiots when they call her evil.
5923416 It's all part of the show, maybe Steven will have a different POV next chapter? (You'll find it soon as I'm about to publish it)
after
all the way to
everything is in italics
5925773 SHIT I MESSED UP, DAMMIT BRAIN
5925773 Fixed, thanks!
"Try it, just try to give us one reason why we should believe you?" Errr, why would she bother? You've made it clear you won't listen anyway.
It's also very hypocritical for Steven to treat Fox like a criminal, yet he treats Pockets very affectionately despite essentially being the same things.
5927571 I don't have control over Eric's lines.
And with Steven, although I admit I didn't make it very clear, he's blinded by what happened years ago, so yeah. That's why he lets her go so easily, because he knows deep inside she's not a real criminal.
I should have thought of making that clearer
A Shiny Scizor. I half expected him to be a Metagross or something.
Oh boy. Aggrons are tough, unless you have a Fighting type, which Steven doesn't.
OH yeah.
Sweet!
Awesome!
Ah memories.
Great, he wants a scapegoat.
Agreed.
Thank you. Also, LayTon.
A Breezie.
INDIANA JONES PONY!
Heh.
So he's at least 28.
No.
Oh the irony.
Ah yes, the pathetic last of the Gym Leaders of Ruby and Sapphire and the Champion in Emerald, a joke if you've got a good Grass move or Thunderbolt. Preferably both as I thin khe has a Whiscash.
That and they evolve into motherf*cking Milotic.
Sarcasm blind I see.
Oh dear.
That was mean.
Seriously?
A Beldum, Steven's Beldum.
No, he is a real living sentient being.
All right Beldum!
Ah, so this goes by Emerald instead of Ruby or Sapphire.
Clever.
Not really.
Fair enough.
Interesting.
HEH!
Cool.
I see.
That's how.
I know.
Ooh myy!
Causing chaos you say? Oh Discord...
Interesting, despite Metagross having high special defense I think, this kid is strong. Also, no strangeR.
A fight. With a Metagross. And the Champion Of Hoenn, well, ex Champion,'s Metagross. You're f*cked. Especially considering your Fairy moves which would normally get STAB for, aren't going to phase him.
Defining the rules, fair enough.
ExperiENCed.
Exactly.
Yep.
HEH!
Thank you.
Of course.
Uh oh.
You aren't good at this, are you?
NEERD!
Aye.
Oh dear.
Interesting.
A human turned into one?
Well hello Phantom Fox Thief.
Becaue it's f*cking funny.
Oh hell.
I wonder if it's an Ocarina of Time?
Called it.
Yep.
Hm...
Yeah, good luck with that.
You and Fluttershy would get along.
Doubt it.
Right, a male Fluttershy voice, gotcha.
Yeah, good luck with that.
Yeah, good luck, you'll need it.
You crazy fool!
This is like Misty and May. Except with more mind control and less fried bikes.
That's a bad pun.
You little...
Stupid friggin complex stuff.
FINALLY!
Got that. Space between both words.
She's good.
Random, AND hilarious.
Oh yeah, how inventive.
A Mega Stone, I wonder...
True.
You sneaky little...
HEH!
Loco in the coco. Seriously, that ring is like the Alicorn Amulet.
And cue her being able to get out of this somehow.
I knew it.
THe Mega Stone...
Indeed.
Yep.
Oooh myy!
You are Magnificent.
Heh, you'll struggle against Wallace without any electric or grass moves.
5942731 I've been reading your comments in almost every story you've visited.
And I gotta say, more readers should do this :p
This is so creative, and so cool, and It feels awesome to see these kind-of live reactions. Glad you enjoyed the story! And keep being awesome!
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Aw come on, you're making me blush...
Bubba was here
huh i don't know why but that pisses me off
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First of all.- There shouldn't be a reason for that, maybe the feel that Bubba is everywhere.
Second of all.- Bubba and I are good friends, so yeah.
5945029 i don't hate bubba I'm talking about the sentence "bubba was here"
Hmmmn, I personally dont notice any chages here, in style or the lack of editing...im afraid uve been missing periods, closing quotes, and a few other things as well...other than that, decent chapter, not great, but decent
Hmm, I don't recall seeing much mistakes when I read over this. Might've helped if I did it more than once.