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The Cake Devil


I've been told I always have a comment on everything. I take that as a compliment to my quick wits.I'm an editor on FF, if you need any help, give a shout. Sincerely Yours The Cake Devil

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Being a reviewer is hardly glamorous work. Just because you get to go to all the hottest productions for free, and pass judgment on the all the so called "hottest" performances in the land, doesn't mean you get a free pass to matters of the heart. Which is exactly what two lonely critics discover.

Alright my dahlings first of all, I'd just like to point out that this beautiful brain child has two daddies! That's right this is a colab between myself and the fantastic dynamic Insula Sol Not even kidding, this story is just as much his as it is mine, and I wouldn't have it any other way.
Now for those of you who don't know Sweetie Bloom and Storm Analysis are two very funny very awesome mlp critics that I totally suggest checking out, and before I forget a tip of the hat to Clifford Beats for his contribution to this love child. With that out of the way, I hope you guys enjoy what I and Insula cooked up. And Sweetie, Storm, if you're reading this, I hope we did ya proud.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 6 )

not to be a party pooper, but isn't writing about real people (the reviewers, not just their avatars,) frowned apon here on FiMfiction?

5047491 Dear Reflective Vagrant.

You would be right except A. It's about their ponsonas, not the actual people, and B. They are established citizens in the mlp universe, ponies not people.
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I'll take Eh, this is mine and Insulas first shot at a Romance/Slice of Life so we are stepping on unfamiliar territory. We have successfully delt with romance in some of our previous fics but never as the central point of the story.

Well... didn't see this coming. :applejackconfused:

5048581 Your welcome! But seriously, good, bad, atroshish? We're not done yet.

5048608 I like it. You're right you toned Storm WAY down, but I like that I adopted that filly I wanted! :ajsmug:

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