I Thought It Would Be Better

by WarPonyAssassin

Epilogue (Short)

Fluttershy quietly slept in the hospital bed, if Pinkie had not found her when she did, she wouldn't have lived, Pinkie refused to let the doctors look at her, she wouldn't leave the bedside. Rainbow Dash had took one looked and flew away with tears, Twilight busied herself trying to help the doctors and using the spell to talk to the animals, she even convinced the nurses to let some of the animals stay by Fluttershy's bed.

Angel was there, the little bunny didn't shed a tear, he was much to tough for that, but he stayed right on Fluttershy's chest. Always listening, making sure her heart was still beating. .

Applejack hadn't really reacted, she just sat down and tried to console Rarity who was bawling her eyes out. But the worst was Pinkie Pie.

She knew it was her fault, she had seen how Fluttershy had been, distraught, sad, but she thought it was because an animal was sick. But that day, the day she had given her the note, she should have stopped her there, she knew, she had felt something was wrong.

Pinkie slammed her head against the bedside and then laid a hoof on Fluttershy's.. she didn't know if Fluttershy could hear her, she had barely woken up since Pinkie had burst into the hospital, swearing a never ending oath to prank the doctors to death if they didn't help Flutters.

"I'm so sorry Fluttershy... I should have done something... If... If I could only have made you smile when you really needed it"

Author's Note:

Inspired by another pic i saw shortly after.

https://derpibooru.org/611974?scope=scpeaaf203b4d2e3bb2f505e747ffbce45d9780776a9

Comments

[HinDae]

Theres a few errors you should iron out

"If Pinkie had NOT found her when she did"

"Always listening, making sure her heart was still bleeding" Should be beating.

Other than that, I liked it, good use of Pinkies Pinkie sense.

[DinosaursAndPonies1153]

5043774 yeah angel should still be hearing because:its good if the heart is bleeding but if you hear something flowing it means you have an internal cut but that probably wouldn't happen

[WarPonyAssassin]

Thank you, I made the corrections

[Shimmering Thunder]

Great story. I wish it was a bit longer though.

[WarPonyAssassin]

7716852 I thought about making it longer but I was already in to bad a way to do that

[Flametiger 12]

Angel bunny does care. I am not crying its my allergy.... In winter never mind

[ExplosionMare]

10043384
Oh, okay! Thanks for the clarification

[PrincessPrettyFoot]

Ok, who’s the wise guy cutting onions in here?

[KingSombraTheTyrantRuler]

F-Fluttershy! No!