Made in my spare time.
Yes, I know some of you don't like self-inserts, but haters gonna hate ;)
I will be trying to come up with new ideas for this.
Reviews for this are appreciated.
WARNING: CONTAINS PINKIE PIE.
Story image STILL pending.
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482135 so what i love all HiE stories.... just not grimdark i say just do this story anyways and let him have fun with it.
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There are good HIE stories...that one about Lauren Faust, and of course Through the eyes of another pony. (And Anthropology is a good PoE)
this is just lame.
482201still let him have his fun but is that lauren faust one really that good i haven't read it yet also is it complete?
Ironically, I agree with 482135 for this story.
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I've read the story. Seriously. Nothing original in it.
482715 "thumbsdown because I've seen more than a 100 stories that go like this." ouch dude that hurts peoples feelings.I love this fic never mind the fact that its a HiE.Im working on my own.
482729 I have nothing against HiE. The Lauren Faust is a good one, Through the eyes of another pony is a good one and Anthropology (not sure if HiE or PoE) is a good one.
At least try to make your own story: original. Write something that others have (never) done before. i try that as well with my own 2 fanfics.
I do not complain about grammar, style whatsoever. only about originality.
482737 oh sorry for the miss understanding but i've never read Through the eyes of another pony i shall go read it but that thumbsdown thing hurt my feelings and the authors people just dislike some of my fics for no reason like with ponies..HERE witch is my PoE fic.
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I always read before giving a dislike.
I love this! Please update when you can!
Right. Read it. And, well...
Honestly, I hate running into stuff where I just don't know where to begin. Look, if it's any consolation, your grammar and spelling is good, and there are a lot of idiots who can't even manage that, but the story is so unoriginal, cliched, and worst of all nonsensical I don't know whether to laugh or cry. The grammar and spelling is a good sign, so I wouldn't be surprised if you could write decently- just not this story. So, some things you may want to do before you try again:
-First, have a good, coherent plot. Run it by someone else first, even the best writers need proofreaders, and the very best would never believe otherwise. If they say it's not coherent, or just plain nonsensical/bad, find out why.
-Next, get a proofreader. They're useful beyond belief. If possible, get more than one.
-Last but certainly not least, try to be certain your plot isn't just a rehash of something that's been done before- or worse, been done a thousand times before. Look up stories with similar tags. Search for generic keywords that might work. Ask people. If you're not willing to do some work, don't even try.
Obviously, I'm not some all-knowing dispenser of writing advice, so take the above with a grain of salt- it's just things I've pieced together that seem to help, and effectively can't hurt.
I read it, and enjoyed it, but....
As stated before, it's not original. I have no problem with this, but I've read plenty stories that go like this.
Try to think up a new idea. It may be hard, but it can be done.
Anyways, enjoyed it, so you get a 'like' from me.
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Sorry if I sound harsh, but, does typing 3000 words off the top of my own head mean that I stole the ideas?
MORE PLEASE
that's how much I like this story
Love and tolerate
-Muxix311
yea!
why are people disliking this I wonder.........I don't see anything wrong
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A lot of people disliked it because (to my best guess) it is a HiE story.
WOOOOOOOOOHOOOOOOOO Pinkie x Eternity
HIE is like marmite. You either love it or hate it. I think your story good but you rush a couple a things too fast but hey that's just my opinion.
Keep up the good work.
Thanks mate.
please make more.....Lol the ponies are crazy.
i hope pinkie and alex falling love.
Looks quite promising, but this chapter's left me with a sore nose.
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huh? Sorry ive never seen anyone use the term "sore nose" before when reviewing something. I'll have to look it up.
cant wait for next chapter
I haven't seen this story since i posted my message