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... Moar.:pinkiecrazy:

4999941 can borrow that when you're done with it? I think I might need to use that myself

"Bonbon, take of my pants" should be off
The twisted shadow can I use it after you?

I've never found a human X pony story I liked, until this one. This is just hot as fuck! I do wish the sex part was longer, but other than that, I loved it!

This is really similar to Sour Candy, except this Bonbon is less stupid and more bitch. 'Twas a fun read!

5000209 I was going to say the same thing! But actually I kinda like where this is going. It's not really rape since obviously she wants it. The battle of the brain over the body. Bon Bon just listen to your heart. You know you want this. And besides... This just means hot mare on mare sex with anon being in the middle of it! I mean what more could you ask?

Tracked for now, but like you must earn since this story takes a but too much from "Sour Candy".

Want attention online? Write clop!

Now, i've read ALOT of clop. And the human X pony very common (especially with Lyra), i haven't seen this kind of scenario, until now. Now, that being said, this kind of situation is personally not my cup of tea, but i admire it either way (call me open-minded: pinkiecrazy:). I don't like how Bon Bon (real name is Sweetie Drops) is bigoted to a human, not a fan of bigots. BUT, i like how it ended, especially Lyra having no problem with Alex fucking Bon Bon. Including Bon Bon's "Shocked" look as her best friend is open to polygamy. (if you toke the to read this; thank you :twilightsmile:)

THATS KIND OF HOT!

This is pretty good stuff. My only complaint is that I wish it lasted a little longer at the end.

When is the next chapter i want a part2 of this my iternal being will give an approval thumbs up 👍

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