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A Soul's Journey

Rainbow and Twilight go on a journey to help ponyville's new blacksmith. Simple, if it weren't for an uncertain time limit, a mentally unstable pegasus and some unexpected obstacles. Fun times abound...

Editor and co-author: Majinie

Chapters (3)

Prologue: A Summer Storm · 11th Sep 2014 · 1,023 words
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Chapter 1: The Accident · 29th Jul 2015 · 3,661 words
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Chapter 2: The Journey Begins · 26th Dec 2015 · 1,389 words
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Abso-l

Abso-l #1 · Jul 29th, 2015 · · · Chapter 1: The Accident ·

Rainbow and Twilight get caught in a rainstorm after a picnick, when they meet Snowstream, the new pony in town, who offers them shelter. After a small accident, the two friends have a long journey ahead to find one of Snowstream's old friends. A Mare whom they have never seen before and know nothing about. A dangerous journey. Fun times abound...

Picnik?
Really?
it's PICNIC.

Secondly, there's a uppercase letter on mare the isn't needed.

And this story sounds terrible by the description.
I hate OC's knowing the mane 6 so damn much

John Snow

John Snow #2 · Jul 29th, 2015 · · · Chapter 1: The Accident ·

6258974 Thanks for the tip. As a german i was not really sure about the correct spelling and will correct that momentarily.
As for the description... yeah, not really happy about that. Still working on something better.
I'm sorry that the premise doesn't appeal to you, but honestly, i don't give a damn, because that is a matter of preference and not important to the story or your review.
I thank you, and bid you adieu.

John Snow