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BewhoUr


I don't care if you're black, white, bisexual, straight, gay, lesbian, short, tall, fat, skinny, rich, or poor. If you're nice to me, I'll be nice to you. Simple as that.

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Welcome to the ponypocalypse. Its basically your worst nightmare combined with a war game. But oh, Its not your average game. This is a game where you win or get deported to the other side of the realm to become an eternal slave. I'm lucky I haven't been captured yet. The only things keeping me fighting are my friends and the pony that depends on me. My realm needs me, my friends need me... but I will do my best and fight. And I may have a chance to win.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 7 )

Amazing. 8/8 rlly gr8 m8.
No really, though, actually something of an interesting story.

Here we go! :rainbowderp:

The story had me lost within it.

No not saying the plot lost me I'm saying I felt as if I were watching a movie in a way., very well written and interesting it pulls you in with a start that is very dark and mysterious.

Good idea to start near the begining rather then the begining leaves the reader open to want to see more and more plus you can expand your characters as you see fit.

Dark, interesting and a fun read can't wait to read more.:twilightsmile:

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Thanks sooooo much! I'm gonna get another chapter out tonight if possible.

4th wall break was cute.

I felt the suspense in this chapter which was awesome the small scene with scootaloo was well done.

The fight scene skipped seemed a little out of place but some prefer to skip fight scenes as some prefer to write them.:twilightsheepish:

It worked eithier way lol.

I love Scootaloos character in this fic as well as dash and hope to see more soon.:rainbowwild::twilightsmile:

Huh, so, do the guns erase all memories permanently, or just pay off them, like that thing from men in black, or everything, but temporarily?

If the first one, that'd be really bleak.

Cya
Raziel-chan

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