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BewhoUr


I don't care if you're black, white, bisexual, straight, gay, lesbian, short, tall, fat, skinny, rich, or poor. If you're nice to me, I'll be nice to you. Simple as that.

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Maybe, just maybe, our own changeling queen meant it when she wanted them all to say how lovely she looks. Maybe she really does look lovely in a gown.
Maybe she just needs someone to assure her.

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Comments ( 34 )

Cute, I like it, also, I can imagine it and Chryssi does look nice,

Feels. :fluttercry:


Oh, and: A Contest?!:raritystarry:

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Thanks very much! ^.^ Shes a beautiful mare, doesn't get the love she deserves.

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Ah, thank you! The feels attack ~ C:
And yes! A friend of mine, Dillon0909, Is holding a contest for villain one shots. c: The prize is bragging rights, which is really best prize.

5403420 I agree, so does a friend of mine, but she doesn't have a fimfiction account.

5403420 And comments. Don't forget the delicious bite of some grade A Colombian comments.

...I may have a problem.

...That I shall deal with later.

*loud snorting sound*

This was nice! I like nice!

It's interesting to see a different portrayal of Chrysalis. I like it!

Aww, cute! Chrissy wants to be pretty!

I always thought she had the most gorgeous, expressive eyes.

Awwww hugs

Short story, lotta like :D

This is a nice little vignette.

I may have to do a short one day about her showing up a Rarity's for a new dress.

If it isn't crowded and bustling with activity, it seems wrong.

Have you ever played a game where you walk through underground tunnels? It's wrong because you know it's not empty, and something's just waiting to jump out at you any second.

Well, most ponies who were to see her would think she was vile scum. Rotten, worthless, and pure evil.

If Shining Armor had taken the time to know her, he would not have seen that.

Actually looked somewhat sad. And...

I love her.

I like this. I do. But that end felt REALLY weird. It was just like it was thrown in to end it on a happy note and in my opinion hurt the story for it. After seeing his attitude towards her through the whole thing and then he just throws that at the end? I felt really forced.

... if this was a writing challenge to see how long it would take to reach 1000, please put it with the description.

So... freaking... rushed...

And by supplies, I mean a stray foal plucked from the streets

I'm just going to assume that this means "to care for" and go on my merry day still feeling happy.

5411287 its got me rather anxious aswell, but i want to know. please just be feeding on the love and nothing else.:applecry:

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Only love, only love. ;)

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Sorry guys! This was just meant to be a pleasant little one shot. I rushed myself to get it done, I'll admit. I would have taken more time to really polish it if I knew it'd get so much attention ;). Thanks for your opinions!

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Aw... That's okay. I know your pain. :fluttercry:

There were some definite feels going on.:fluttershysad: Quite an accomplishment for a short piece.

Well done.:raritywink:

Wow, this story is your most popular one yet, and it's by far the best you've written. Amazing job as always.

5508326
Thank you so much! Its so nice to hear that I've been improving, and I'm glad you're still interested in what I write.
(I loved writing this story e.e)

5508329 I'll always be interested in your stuff, i love the way you write, short and sweet, reality is never buttered (exaggerated, etc.), and you have the best way of putting details, I'm very surprised this didn't get featured, considering one just like this did.

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Oh damn, thank you. I try not to butter up the truth and I am a theory freak, so writing fanfiction is a good way to clear stuff from my head. Its good to know I have an enjoyable style and at least a couple people who appreciate what I'm writing!
/) Ultimate brohoof, STAY AWESOMEEE!

lost 20 soldiers to a manticore?, what are you? imperial guardsmen against warpspawn hounds?

also i like the story so far .

5510304 there was more than one manticore.

5643975 still imperial guardsmen

Exactly one thousand words?

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Exactly, to point. :ajsmug:

Would you like a proper cover for this? I can custom-make one. :twilightsmile:

"...Foal..."
"...Fern leavess..."
"...Water."

One of these things is not like the other.

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