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I'm not exactly the best of writers... I hope to dear god I'm not the worst.

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For the Vermillion Forest Pikachu, life was pretty peaceful. Apart from the occasional electric mishap the other Pokemon left them to their own devices allowing them to grow freely. But then the rapture happened. All of them were sent to a new world and the worst part? They were all separated, flung to different parts of this place. Unity seemed very unlikely.

Some were lucky and found sanctuary quickly. Others not so much. When the second-in-command finds a friend in the isolated inventor Experiment, things begin to look up. Perhaps he can reunite the horde after all?


Side Story to Zeusdemigod131's story "A new world, A new way"

Cover made by Votederpycausemufins

If you enjoyed the story make sure to keep up to date on the chapter progress by checking my userpage every so often. The progress chart is kept there.


Any constructive criticism that can be given is greatly appreciated and will never be ignored. If you didn't like this story and can help me improve on it you will have my thanks.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 78 )

Hey, good chapter so far and it's nice to see someone changing the formula a bit and used the idea of actually using natural born Pokemon to be the main characters of a story.

First: welcome to Equss, second, great start.

Good luck !

Btw: Now Xavier has someone with the same name.

The three Pichu named Larry, Curly and Moe

Oh dis gunna be gud.

5057103 Thanks! I was trying to give a different spin than what normally happens and I'll readily admit that I'm not the first to try this(Sev and the PLA were the first ones and doing a smashing job of it as well), but I can at least claim to be the second.


5057315 Thanks as well!


5058247 Now the question is... where to have them crop up?

5059102 Twilights Library, for maximum 3 stooges

5059173 That might actually go against canon there if they were to appear right off the bat in the library. I do have another area where they might cause mayhem but I'd have to clear it with Zeus first.

I can certainly say this... I am definitely interested. It's not often that one can deviate from the formula and make their first attempt be good. Much like I did. I shall be keeping my eye on this story and eagerly await the reappearance of Larry, Curly and Moe.

... DAMN IT !

I wanted to use Medic's archeotype for one of my characters, a well, I will go with House instead.

And I like this story, simple and enjoyable

5151111 Hey there always were two medics in TF2, If I got the RED one doesn't that mean you could use the BLU one? Just means they'd try to murder one another if they ever met.

5152286 ... GENIUS!

Oh boy, this promisses to be one hell of a fight then.

Yohohoho.

I doubt I will fully go for the Medic archeotype, but if I tweek it a bit... have to start working on this. Thanks for the idea, and good luck on your writing.

5153141 same to you mein freund! Oh and did you catch the second reference?

5153231 I am afraid I did not get the second one... At least not clearly.
Is it from a videogame?

5153523 Yep. For a hint from a 3ds title.

5154768 Alright...! Then I have no idea of what could it be.
I just became a Nintendo user just recently.

5198601 Yup. I've got a massive amount of TF2 references planned in just the characters alone. However there's another game line for character references as well. There's 2 names in there from the second game and if you guess it you can get a coo- oh right... they ate them all. Eh gimme a bit I'll think up a prize.

Oh so a Fennekin is in the lab now. Fennekin and it's evolution's are one of my favorites.

I feel so doumb for not getting what this other game its. Still, nice chapter.

5203606 To be honest... I advertise a crapton of this game at my workplace and not many people know what it is either. So don't feel stupid... seriously don't or I'll have the 3 pichu track you down and tickle you... actually that's not that bad a punishment is it?

5207312 Thanks, I still don't like don't knowing things.
And the three Pichus thing would be more of a challenge, I am not a ticklish person, so bring it on!

Also, would there be any chance of meeting the rest of the team in this story?

5207515 Chance? I'd say it's more of a certainty. I plan on introducing as much of the horde as possible... and the rest of the mercs as well in one form or another.

5208794 I meant the mercs, but you already answer me so Yay!

Oh boy, there are other mercs in this world besides my boys, this sounds awesome!

5209271 Well they're incarnations of the TF2 mercs but they've never met. Though there is one mercenary that will be making an appearance in upcoming chapters on the pony side.

Good chapter and good story so far I hope this fic makes it past reviewing stage keep up the good work
Edit: team fortress 2 references are amazing and I hope one has a engi reference

Is jackal the spy or the sniper I can't tell they are both assassins but I can't tell?

5258836 You will get your answer eventually my friend. Though it may not be the one you seek.

5258920 ok mate I'll just sit here waiting for the next chapter with my strange hunted re forced compound bow.

Congrats on getting to the main folder may your story be long and powerful
Also get writing I will like to see the engi soon.

5261999 Gonna take a wee bit. Got 2 stories(this included) that I'm working on total as well as we're about to hit the holiday rush at my workplace... That and dynasty warriors is an epic title and takes up a f:yay:ton of time.

You can, however, keep up to date on the progress of the chapter by checking my progress meter on my page.

Jackle is the spy he used a knife and sniper uses a shiv or large machete may I add no hat sniper always has a hat adding to the fact that sniper hides and mostly uses a SMG for close range I know so cus I play sniper and spy most of my time but what knife was he useing can be the big earner or the eternal reward depends on the size of the knife.

5278054

Gonna give a hint here... things are not as you believe them to be. There's 2 lines of references going right now. One is fairly obvious as a lot of people play TF2. Other is not so much.

5278078 ok I've come up with a formula ok hear it is:
Iron bat = hit by scout +desert hiding skin and mane may be his hat (hypeathacly) by as I remember all the meet the team vids I don't remember sniper getting hit by scout I need a long think to finger it out but I will find it I know so.

5278845 ok I've made up my decision on the formula and very close its sniper he has the most insulting lines of insults but may I ask dose your tf2 characters have items eg,heavy brass beast or medic the quick fix that will finish the tally from this spy in this siduation would just shout F:yay: and that's it but sniper would just go in a quiet voice ah piss or any other negative insult why I know I have my pc fixed and played sniper non stop just waiting for the answer of the items qwestion and that will do it bye for now.

Will saxton hale be in this after all he is the CEO of Mann co so it but it's only logical who else would hire the mercs.

5309207 That would be taking the references a little too far unfortunately. So it's with utmost certainty that I can say that neither Mr Hale nor a counterpart will be in this. The references are meant to represent the mercs but not actually be mercenaries themselves. Sorry if this is disappointing but I've gotta stay within a certain limit of the actual New World canon.

5309428 thats good he kills people (hippies) for no good reason so yea

Larry, Curly and Moe

Ah, The Three Stooges; the very definition of slapstick comedy
I have a feeling these three are gonna get into even more trouble than the infamous Pichu Brothers

5355332 You can haz more. New chapter is nearly ready for the proofreading stages.

Finally got jaratie for my sniper it took three weeks but it was worth it now my lucks man set is complete and Jackle is the sniper
very good chapter and hopeing for more in time

-Rastasi signing out

I started to walk out of the kitchen but stopped to stare something odd.

stare at something

God, you'd think with 3 pre-readers, one of those idiots would've caught this.
.........wait a second...

Edit: Actually, the 'at' is on the Google Doc, dunno why it didn't make the jump to fimfiction...

You get three guesses as to what the Walrein said and the first two don't count.

1. I am the great Cornholio. I need teepee for my bunghole.
2. The cake is a lie.
3. Ahhhhh, yummy meat for my pot.

Ah, Crash Bandicoot. I'd love to say I have good memories of this game series, but honestly most of them are of me screaming unintelligibly at my TV after dying for the fifty bajillionth time, then rage quitting to go play Pokémon or Sly Cooper.

5373134 Odd. thought I'd fixed that before doing the copy/paste over to here. Might have done it afterwards so that could be the reason. Fixing it now though, thanks for letting me know!

5372499
Sorry! Couldn't resist

5373134 So, you called yourself an idiot... yay mutual idiocy...?

But yeah, I know what you mean, it was on the G docs, just didn't transfer all that well.

Switched back hooves? Soul Eater reference?

5421159 I honestly couldn't remember where it was from, but once I remembered it and was editing I couldn't resist adding it in.

YOU MEAN THE JOEY WHO'S RATTATA IS IN THE TOP PERCENTAGE OF RATTATAS?

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