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but without the cartoonish body proportions

sorry that's a deal-breaker

Comment posted by Twi-Fi Network deleted Sep 13th, 2014

loving this so far!

*finishes reading*

Well there goes my hope that she was a sub for a secret bondage fetish cult and that the others would end up taking turns to do what they will with her.

Don't get me wrong, enjoying what's here so far but give me a second to get over the disappointment...

...

(Pssst, if anyone wants to steal that idea, gopher it!)

There better be hot Twilestia action.

off to good start!

This looks good so far.

Now I'm hoping for some Twilestia action. As well as Twilight/Everyone! Well, the girls, not everyone.

I'll be watching this.

Cool story so far, I'd love to read more!

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Aw, why not let the boys have some fun, too? :ajsmug:

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That Flash Sentry tag miiight be there for a reason. :twilightblush:

but without the cartoonish body proportions.

you can remove this and let others decide on what proportions the girls actually have for themselves.:twilightsmile:

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I probably could. But I felt I would get more complaints about describing the characters with proportions that don't match the movie's character models.

4992812 Well, she does have all the required female equipment as well...

4992833 Eh hay we don't have to see what the author sees, when I think humanized Pinkie I think the one from the movie with regular sized boobs. not the milf jugs we Americans have all over the place.

A futa-Twi fic? Well... I deeply approv- Hold up... is that a Flash Sentry icon, dood?

I will stay positive for the sake of reading some good futa-Twi on everyone, dood.

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Upon further reflection, I think you're right.

Good advice, thanks. :twilightsmile:

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Now, what kind of writer would I be if I didn't cater to the FlashLight crowd? :twilightsmile:

(With extra dicks. :derpytongue2:)

4994212 A confused writer, dood. Well... here's to Flash Sentry getting pegged, dood.

Out of sheer curiosity, I started this and... I'm not freaked out. Weird.

Keeping track of this cuz I'm still curious.

Same as Brawny. You...you made it work. Faved and followed.:twilightsmile:

Hmm, is this an actual condition? I've heard of hermaphrodites, but is this specific type possible? Still this promises to be interesting. I wonder if Twilight will find a guy to take her female virginity?

Two mares hear the noise coming from the room across the hall.
"Nice to know I wasn't the only one to give it up the same day they moved in" said Sarcastic Sculptor
"Pity we go to different schools, else that could have been me you gave it up to." said Misery Mare
"Well then, amiga, we'll have to make up for lost time..."
Soon enough, Pinkie and Twilights room wasn't alone in emanating the sounds of two mares entangled.

(Apologies to MTV and Glenn Eichler)

4995329 To be quite frank, yes.:twilightsmile:

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Now, what kind of writer would I be if I didn't cater to the FLESHLIGHT crowd? :twilightsmile:
(With extra dicks. :derpytongue2:)

tehe :twilightblush:

Well now, very good. Tracking. :ajsmug:

4995576 Yes as in yes ther are people like this? That'd be pretty cool actually.

:ajsmug: I'm guessing Flash Sentry will be the pizza guy.

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It's almost impossible to get a fully formed and functional penis while also having a fully functional female reproductive system. There's really a whole range of possible outcomes in terms of genitals, given that the same bit of flesh is trying to develop into two different structures at the same time.

However, one possible outcome that I've come across is an elongated clitoris (about 3-4 inches long) as part of an otherwise normal vagina. That's what I'm basing this on, with a few liberties for the sake of fantasy. In that sense, it's a bit unrealistic, but I am still trying to present it as realistically as possible.

First off, props for not yanking ponyverse twilight for this fic. secondly, While not a fan of futa this isn't badly done. Though I do hope you provide the same amount of leadup you did to this scene in future chapters. I do enjoy introduction and character development before any type of sex scene.:twilightsmile:

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Count on it. Even though I'm writing about human Twi having sex (lots of sex), it's all meaningless with exploring how she interacts with the people around her.

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Looking forward to it then!:twilightsmile:

Like I said, I like the introduction chapter you did. It was nice that we got all that lead-up.

Also, abit of advice, upon a rereading of the clop section, I noticed that you jumped into the sex scene a little fast, also,for a virgin Twilight sure knew what she was doing without a hitch.

Granted, you can excuse the rush into sex given that in your previous chapter you pretty much said that Pinkie Pie was a nempho who gets banged every tuesday. :rainbowwild:

Though with other characters I would suggest a little more caution and less speeding into the sex.:twilightsheepish:

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I hope it didn't seem like Twi knew what she was doing, because she really didn't. About the only initiative she took at first was to caress Pinkie's chest a bit (something she'd be familiar with from her own body).

When she went down south, she was all about tentative exploration (and she does have some familiarity there too, just not up close). You could make an argument that I could have (or should have) explored that some more, but there will be plenty of time for Twi to gain experience.

For the rest of the scene in this chapter, Pinkie was the one in control. From which you can infer that she is experienced (all the last chapter really demonstrated is that she is not ashamed of her body, unlike most of Western society).

This is not my first foray into fanfiction in general, even though the story counter up there only says '1'. So don't worry, I'll do my best to make it a good ride. :twilightsmile:

'Twas good! Have a like and favorite!

I... I can't believe this hasn't been done before.

Hats off to you, sir, as if it has been done before and I am wrong (read: but I am never wrong), this is written to perfection.

~HM892

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There are several EQG human Twilight stories out there, if that's what you're referring to, though most of them don't involve nearly as much Twidick.

However, I am glad you're enjoying the story. :twilightsmile:

There's no keeping things from pinkie is there?:facehoof:

The sex felt rather lacking to me. Personally, I like long, metaphor-laden,wordy sex scenes that convey the hormonal rush and the showcase of pleasure for as long as possible, without overextending their welcome. It makes me really get into it. However, I think the short sex scenes might be meant to display Twi's inexperience, and, if that's actually the case, might be a rather unique way of showing it.

I'm liking the pacing for the rest of the story. It's going at just the right speed and is meaty tasty with detail ;3

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*waves*

Okay so..

Before I start I have to ask: Does Homo Sapiens Twilightus have a huge cock?

Oh hey.
I'm alright with this.
*favs.*

5002093 that's what I'm trying to figure out. Haven't started, so im trying to glean what is gonna happen here

Edit: yup. Penis

Dicks don't make the fic.

That chapter ender.
:rainbowlaugh:

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