Rainbow Dash always thought of pushing herself to the limit, but when she tells Twilight her true goal in life, she recieves an response worth remembering.
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(This is also a late gift for a dear friend who's birthday passed two days ago. She loves Rainbow Dash and Twilight and the best gift I can provided is this. Hope you enjoy it! ;)
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Their.
Encountered.
What.
I'm assuming you meant something along the lines of, "Rather than being locked up in Nightmare Moon's castle."
Her.
Uh, maybe, "Plus, I would be chuffed to be a witness."
Repetition of plus is a bit clunky.
Interesting one, this. I thought it was very sweet.
4905196 Thank you very much darling. I'll fix up those errors when I can.
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You're quite welcome.
Awww, what a sweet story!
Definitely giving off some positive vibes here. However, there are a few things need to be corrected. 
The "dialogue" that is written, the "...", is kind of unnecessary. I think it's better off that you described how they were in silence, or something like that.
A tiny tense error.
The rest is explained from the other guy.