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Kanske_2099


I am a brony who enjoys reading serious fics and like to draw , i am not a pro, so i only make simple drawings and nothing much

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Today is so great! mah sister said i can miss school so we can have some sisters relaxing time!,
but she says Granny and Big Mac are really busy so it's gonna be just the two of us!

We'll be going to the lake and she says i can pick the next place!
She will tell miss Cheerilee, that ah'm sick or something, so all is good

Ah'm so glad, a day without school. It's gonna be awesome!

Special thanks to Marciline
for her help in editing this story.

An unsolved murder and the dissapearing of two fillies, are worrying the otherwise calm and happy town of Ponyville.
A ruthless killer is in town, and has been for several weeks but nopony has ever find out till that draedful day, the body of a filly is found near some trees on the entrance of the Everfree Forest.

A one shot, i may do more, but only if i see some interest on this one.

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Comments ( 7 )

This is a good story, however, if you wish, I can edit it.

Who was the killer? I'm very confused.

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That would be apreciated... i tried talking to a couple editors but nopony answered...


"Something took Applejack's place and told a lie..."

A creature capable of lies and deceit.... think about it . . Something that can change its appereance

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Ummmmm.......A changeling?

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Really?! So the unknown changeling is the murderer?

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I leave it to reader's interpretation.

A changeling could be the killer, or the changeling could lure little fillies to the bad guy's hideout.

I had other stories around this one, but they seriously need some editing. Perhaps i will post them in the future

A Changling but, they feed off of love. I guess that times could be bad enough that they need to kill ponys but, why only children. Wouldn't they kill adults to? Then again children are easier to fool.

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