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This all seems to be moving kinda fast... Not only is the actual romance with Mac skipped over essentially, but then we also get the world acting in favour of our protagonist. Feels like a dream, vague and inconsistent.
I'll be the first to admit that I've sped things up for this story. I'm going to be slowing it down, and yeah, there's a reason for the dream like/magical reason things seem to be happening. It's something that's going to be explained throughout the Vogonverse as it unfolds.
Ah, I knew I forgot something... Yeah, part of the reason for the the advancement in the story was to introduce Applejack, but I am going to be going back and showing the romance between Mac and Jessica as the story progresses.
Hooray, Big Mac's gonna be able to see his family soon! Hopefully Granny Smith will become affordable before too long.
This all seems to be moving kinda fast... Not only is the actual romance with Mac skipped over essentially, but then we also get the world acting in favour of our protagonist. Feels like a dream, vague and inconsistent.
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I'll be the first to admit that I've sped things up for this story. I'm going to be slowing it down, and yeah, there's a reason for the dream like/magical reason things seem to be happening. It's something that's going to be explained throughout the Vogonverse as it unfolds.
Ah, I knew I forgot something... Yeah, part of the reason for the the advancement in the story was to introduce Applejack, but I am going to be going back and showing the romance between Mac and Jessica as the story progresses.
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