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Also, "Finally giving in she reached out and touched the anthropomorphic stallion and everything around me changed from the email page to a multicolored psychedelic rainbow." You switch perspectives for a single pronoun mid-sentence. Should be "everything around her changed".
Typo in the first sentence. "Shutter" should be "shudder" instead.
Also, "Finally giving in she reached out and touched the anthropomorphic stallion and everything around me changed from the email page to a multicolored psychedelic rainbow." You switch perspectives for a single pronoun mid-sentence. Should be "everything around her changed".
Celestia
Vinyl Scratch
Which story comes first? I imagine Tia would need the longest buildup to do right, so my vote is for Vinyl.
An extra i there.