Lol the first thing that came to mind was an anthro big mac?

Alright author. believable <.<

Your story title needs punctuation; I suggest a colon.
"Plowed Fields: A Big Mac Romance"

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Thanks for the suggestion.

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Thanks for catching those for me.

This is really quite nice so far. I don't quite think I'm invested enough to see this through, but I quite like how you write.

Getting the picture off Google Image Search is no excuse not to give a source. In fact it took me all of a couple minutes to track it down from a reverse image search.

[Source]

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Thanks, and the source shall be added. Also ClemiKinkajou, if you are reading this and want the image removed... let me know and I'll do it.

LF

More please.

Honestly, the fact that you handwaved the entire romance and the fateful night is kind of boring and bland. You are pretty much just expositing what happened in less than a paragraph and I can't find in myself to keep reading a story that glosses about the most important part of it's drama. I can't but downvote this story, for it really dissapointed me in it's execution, which was from the beginning badly put, full of plot holes, paced poorly and had the depth of a beige novela.

2/10