Faithfull Student

by Kichi

Faithfull Student (Edited/Cleaned)

Faithfull Student

With the signature flash of a teleportation spell Twilight appeared in front of Celestia court room, slamming the doors open with a bang, and fury set upon her features.

“Celestia! By the power I have as the Princess of Magic and Friendship, you are under arrest” Shouted Twilight

The two Princesses stared into each others eyes, Celestia could see the fury in Twilight eyes and with a move of her hooves, dismissed the nobles and guards.

“The Court is finished for the day, tell everypony.” Celestia calmly ordered the guards as they leave, once all witnesses have left Celestia returns her gaze to Twilight

“Twilight, My most faithful student, care to tell me what is wrong? It seems you are confused about something” Commented Celestia as she maintained her serene smile while watching Twilight.

“No, Princ… I mean, Celestia… I’m not confused, to the contrary, I managed to finally remove the veil from before my eyes and see you for what you actually were, even if it damage me to see what you are in reality” Say Twilight

“Ohh… And what am I? My Dear Twilight” Asked Celestia

“A Tyrant, a parasite of the throne, and one of the worst ponies I have met.” Twilight answered.

“It hurts me to hear you say that about me… Tell me,... What are your reasons?”

“I think you know them well… How could you do that to those ponies, but not only that, even to your own sister Princess Luna” Twilight shouted angrily as he mane began to smolder from internal flames.

“And what did I do and to whom?” Asked Celestia

“Stop your facade, Celestia… I meet them… The ponies in stone, and I know the truth” After Twilight said that, Celestia gentle smile changed into a more serious frown.

“I see… It was something that I suspected could happen, but you, of everypony, to discover it, is a great surprise” Commented Celestia her dark expression deepening in its shadow.

“Why? Why did you do that?” Asked Twilight as her fury begin to morph and change to a sad expression
“Why? Because it was what I needed to do, all in the name of Harmony and Friendship.” Answered Celestia as she returned her gentle smile and began to approach Twilight but Twilight released a beam from her horn that impacted in front of Celestia.

“Don’t you dare to move… Friendship? Harmony? They were only proclaiming that you were not suited for the throne... That Luna was better than you. And because of that, you sealed them in stone… Not only that, you lied to me, since I was your student, until today” Twilight angrily spat.

“But Twilight… In what did I lie? Yes, I bound them in stone, but those times were very critical, I could not make someone else, believe me” Commented Celestia as she tried to approach again but Twilight unleashed another beam.

“I said don’t move… Even if what you say is true… They did not deserve to be put in stone for all of those years, you could have freed theme once their sentence had passed, instead you bind them in stone, not only that, you even make stories about them, only to disguise your lies… But that’s not all, the worst is what you did to your sister… Why you did that to Princess Luna?” Twilight Asked Celestia.

“My dear Twilight… What do you think I did to my lovely sister? You know I love her, it hurt me so much when she was sent away for that millenium of years, as Nightmare Moon… What are you trying to say exactly that I did?” Celestia asked to Twilight as she began to grow more angry.

“What you did? What you did? You banished her to the moon only because she thought you were going too far with your punishments… but not only that… No… the worst is that you lied TO ME!!” Twilight mane changed to a purple ethereal magic.

“Friendship? Harmony? That was good! Meet five friends and without us knowing each other of nothing, we are the best friends thanks to the magic of friendship and harmony… And the worst is that you catched me, not only me, but my friends… Elements of Harmony? MOSTLY THE ELEMENTS OF BRAINWASHING” Twilight screamed in the royal alicorn voice.

“What are you…” Celestia begin to say but was interrupted by Twilight.

“IM talking about your lie about the elements of the harmony, it’s all clear now… How strange Princess Luna acted, why Discord was not cleaned by the elements, and the way we feel weaker every time we used them” Say Twilight as little by little her mane was returning to normal.

Celestia tried to talk again but the words did not seemed to get out from her mouth
“It was not bad, really… After we shot Princess Luna with the F*CK*NG elements of brainwash, you appear as if nothing happened and begin to help her, in her confused state, so that she believes you, and then after a little talk with us, you have all the time you wanted to make her believe what you wanted. You have first a thousand years to make a tale about the mare in the moon, and then after you make her crazy bound alone on the moon for a thousand years, you make us believe that she was the evil one, we brainwashed her and then you got her to make her believe that story… Like you are the great big sister, and she is the ex-great monster, no one knows the truth and you are also sure that she is not going to defy you again, all perfect, except because you did not think about only one thing” Commented Twilight.

“And what was that one thing? If I could know.” Asked Celestia.

“That Discord will break, after he broke loose and we sealed him in stone again, I begin to study the Elements, the history about Equestria, and why is that instead of being reformed like your sister, was transformed in stone. Not only that but your idea of making him to be reformed by Fluttershy. All of that was very strange” Twilight commented, as she began to exhibit all of this.

“For luck… at least for me, after some study of the elements, and managed to get out a couple of things from Discord by subtle questions… I managed to find the truth, after that I only needed to check it, not to hard by using a couple of spells, and your expression during all of our talk finished to corroborate all… At first I didn’t want that to be true, that it was a stupid theory, or some lie by those ponies transformed in stone, but I can’t ignore that... Not any more...” Twilight looked upon Celestia as little by little after getting the information free, she begins to calm.

“You have something to say about all this? Because I want… no I need a answer… You were like a second mother to me, after those years as your student… So… What can you say?” Asked Twilight looking to her former teacher.

After a couple of seconds that seemed to be an eternity for Twilight, Celestia begin to speak, with a smile.

“Just a question first, My dear Twilight… How many ponies know about your deductions? Did you tell this to any of your friends?” Asked Celestia with her gentle smile

“No... No one… I wanted to be sure first, before telling to someone… Is that all you want to say?”

“Not at all… You are true in every fact, everything you say is correct… But…” Celestia begin to say as Twilight looked surprised to the white Alicorn

“You are not going to deny it? To try to tell me more lies?” Asked Twilight a little surprised about what her teacher says
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“Not at all… You discovered everything… But… There is something you did not think of… My faithful student” Commented Celestia with her calm smile

“And what it is that?” Asked Twilight

“Just… This” Answered Celestia as her horn began to glow and suddenly the six elements of Harmony or Harmony or Brainwash appeared in front of Celestia and begin to float around her.

“What? But that… It’s impossible… They are in the tree of Harmony… How do you take them? When...?” Asked Twilight surprised looking the elements, all with the cutie marks of her friends, and also the one that was also like her Cutie Mark

“You are true in everything, my most faithfull student. But there are a couple of things you don’t know, after we were sealed by that chaotic plant of Discord, you and your friends freed us, me and my sister from that trap and put the elements in the tree, that make a reaction that destroyed the seeds completely and those plants, and since no one wants to go near my old castle, they were very safe there. But I lied when I told you that I lost my connection with the Elements and the elements need to stay there, as you see however, I can still summon them.” Commented Celestia with her typical smile as she approached Twilight

“What? But…” Asked Twilight confused as she looked Celestia with the elements smiling.

“I suppose that I need to have a little talk with Discord and make something about those statues, but I still have time… My faithful student, your first mistake was to confront me without knowing all the information, and only with a hypothesis, Your second mistake was to discover something that you did not need to discover… And the third mistake was thinking that I was defenseless” After Celestia say that a big and colorful rainbow appeared from the elements and shoot to Twilight that could not react for the surprise. After the light wrap around Twilight, she end in the floor, without energy, as she mumble

“W...Why?” Asked before Celestia horn glow and she fall asleep

“Good dreams, my dear and most faithfull student… Don’t worry about anything, when you wake up, you will forget everything”

With a smile, Celestia summoned a quill and a scroll and begin to write

To Spike the dragon

My dear student is going to stay a week in Canterlot, in a little study about royalty and Alicorns, and also to remember old times as she stay with me, my sister and her parents. I hope you can tell all her friends, and that no one disturb her this week.
Signed
Princess Celestia

After that, with a little glow of her horn, the scroll disappeared in a green fire, as she smiled.
"My most faithful student, this week is going to be great" Celestia whispered into Twilights ear as she smiled.

Author's Note:

Thanks to Xaldon Ajide for cleaning it... The same history, but cleaned, I left it as a new chapter so anyone can check the before and the after

Comments

[EverfreePony]

Hmm... content-wise, it a rather strong story of Celestia the tyrant. However, I’ll be honest with you, there are plenty of recurring issues pertaining to capitalization and punctuation as well as mixed up past and present tenses. If you want, I can look at it and give you some basic tips of how to find and correct these problems yourself

[Kichi]

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I know, it was a old thing in my head that I put in here... It could not be much, but in that time I decided to put it.

It's a surprise that someone decided to read it. Thank You.

[EverfreePony]

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No problem, I don’t blame you for that.

Honestly, I see no difference between reading a new and an old story. It’s not like their message would fade away with time, after all. You’re welcome!