Just your average cryptid, skulking around.
They should've stopped prancing long ago. They should've died before their kin did. They should've had a funeral with their family there to mourn their death.
But they never did.
And though they've lived with this pain for longer than they ever should... Their friendship stays strong. They are inseparable. Nothing can take away their friendship and their love for one another. But that's the problem.
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That was os amzingly sad... THAT I LOVED IT! Story with a hint of sad is actually really epic! Keep up the work soldier!
*dies inside* Well done good sir... Well done... You almost brought me to absolute tears with this fic, more you crazy bastard, more...
It's probably just me but I don't believe this deserves a dark tag. (Not in a bad way). I think a tragedy tag would be better placed but then again I'm usually wrong.
Ugh I might as well read Origin of an Egghead now. I'm sad now...
BE DEPRESSED WITH ME
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You do know that I wrote this while bored, didn't read it over except one time, and didn't edit it, right? I just sat there and said, hey, lemme make a story aboutbsomething I thought about long ago and nearly forgot about. Then I quickly wrote it and said, "Welp, I hardly put any effort into that...", but posted it anyways...
But enough of that, I just wanna say thank you so much for reading and enjoying this story. I hope to hear your thoughts on future stories!
4907974 Yeah, but I'm too lazy to do all of that...
Yes, go onto Origin of Egghead so your heart can ache my dear friend!
This was nice, or well, maybe 'nice' isn't the right word.
But I found it interesting to see the idea explored. Usually you have Twi as an immortal, watching the mane5 die, and you feel like if only they could live forever too. Now here we see what it would be like if everthing was 'perfect' for Twilight. Her friends live, her brother and sister-in-law live, her mentor(/motherly figure) live. It's practically perfect for her, but everyone she cares about most around her suffers for it.
Yet they still keep going.
Good job. ^^
A few small notes,
Forced*
This confused me. It sounds like they are seeing everpony die at once. Though I understand the intention.
Maybe something like "or live together forever, enduring the pain of watching everypony die." ?
I dunno.
Keep up the good work.
4913597 Thank you, and yes that's what I meant by that. They stay alive together as friends, while everypony else around them dies. At the moment that I was writting it, I didn't quite know how to word it better than that for some reason
. Again, thank you so much for the nice/constructive comment!
A nice little story : ) Worth a fave.
4921638 Thank you so much!
so depressing man. Now I don't wanna keep.
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I think that second sentence is incomplete...
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Yes, it is. At least I though is understandable.
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seeing that image hurt me....
5400047 Me too...
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I shall make a story of this now.
5404242 I would love to see it!
It's a thing.
You know, shots to the heart get a bit more bearable each time you receive them. Don't get me wrong, it still hurts like heck, but not cripplingly so. As the old saying goes, immortality is a curse (or if you prefer the TV Tropes version, Who Wants to Live Forever.) I'm more in the camp that immortality is a curse if you're the only one with it, but that's beside the point. It's honestly a wonder they haven't gone mad yet. At least they have each other, forever and ever and ever...
Wait, I think I know how to make it a bit better. She said she wanted to be with her lover, right? It may not accomplish the grow old together part, but what if her lover was already immortal? Commence the Mane 6 Omniship!
6152398 I understand that. It's more Like "Ouch, you hit me with feels!" and not "AAAUUUGGGHHH!! MY HEART! THIS LEVEL OF FEELS IS TOO MUCH TO HANDLE!!!" with you clutching your chest and sobbing.For me, I'll read something like "Aw, that's sad." with a neutral face and move onto something else.
Very interesting take to the 'immortal problem'.
Nice work.
6501652 Thanks! It was just a quick thing I thought of and jotted down, nothing too special. I'm glad you found it interesting.
My heart is breaking
....but you're such an amazing writer!
7715370 Ehh I do my best, but I'm trying to improve much more. Thank you though! I really appreciate the comment!
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You're welcome!
Sounds like less than friendship and more like a friendship dependent suicide pact!
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🎸As long as we got each other
We got the world spinnin' right in our hands.
Baby you and me, we gotta be
The luckiest dreamers who never quit dreamin'.🎷