Having been banished for second time. Sombra begins his journey of revenge. Continuing his rein of terror.
Thanks to LoveWishes for the story idea.
Having been banished for second time. Sombra begins his journey of revenge. Continuing his rein of terror.
Thanks to LoveWishes for the story idea.
Here's what I'd suggest. Keep your chapters over or at least 1,000 words. The story is okay, though I'm kind of wondering why Sombra didn't let Zecora gaze into her worst fears, or really do anything. Bit of a tease for me, it really is.
I am more of a short chapter/story writer, so the chapters aren't going to be very long. Also, Sombra was banished and there for would not have such strength for much.
Quiet is the word you are looking for.
Pretty sure that should be months.